Below

Cascading bridal Veil, over rocks into the Deep, deep vale below

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/16/2009 9:20:00 PM

Luv your imagery and words, Sara, you are the Queen of the Haiku ... sorry my Wordless poem was not to your liking but its about a deep romance that ended with all his empty words... never followed through on anything he said about "us" and even though it ended this past June its still fresh in my mind that he wasn't "the one" I thought he really was ... hope u understand it helps to write it down, express it, and let it out into the atmosphere so I don't have to think about it any more... luv

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/9/2009 12:49:00 PM

piercing! Light & Love

Jared Pickett

Date: 11/9/2009 8:14:00 AM

Nice.....:JP}

Daver Austin

Date: 11/9/2009 5:14:00 AM

Wow!...what a wonderful view. daver