Beloved Snow


    the path is wet beneath my feet
with little frills of ice adorning things
        all is crystalline, frosty and filigree
when, suddenly the air is full of snowflakes
       enchanting and beautiful to behold
for snow has come . . .  to be my beloved 
    and I am left breathless and waiting
as he floats among the forest trees
        then, I feel his sweet caresses
upon my hair and upon my cheek
      there is no sound except his silent kisses
and I stand still . . .  in his loving embrace
                 as he swirls around me
    my world is quiet and tranquil, serene
except for snow's whispering voice
        drifting, floating, and hovering
and I whisper back "I love you"
        yet, I know . . .  that he will leave me
and be but a memory melting away. . .

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March 22, 2023


Poetry/Free Verse/beloved snow
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Horne Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 8:31 AM
love this very clever write, my friend - sorry I've missed so many of those contests (boy, they fill so quickly)
La France Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 9:19 AM
Jack, thank you so much for the compliment. Hope you can enter my current contest, oh yes, they fill very quickly, blessings, Constance
Gayagay Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 5:06 AM
Great imagery, romantic, brings tears to my eyes as I try to imagine if I were persona.
La France Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 6:27 PM
Ryan, thank you so much for the compliment, did I write it yearning for a lover, perhaps, blessings, Constance
Daniel Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 1:58 AM
Wondrous personification, Constance:) great ending line too:)
La France Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 6:28 PM
Joanna, thank you so much for the compliment, blessings, Constance
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