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Beloved One

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The most romantic period movies of all time


Ask me not whenceforth
from which place or time I come 
from, dear lufu of mine  
Beewolf and seizer of hearts 
come-hither at me door Sire 

Query onely beau 
and without askance kiss me 
Like a flowery rose dear 
sitting on thy breast sweet love 
scented sweetly at your side 

Seek me as the root 
of all that passions thy soul 
Gentle as the winds
that blow gently close to thine 
tousled as my wild,wild hair.

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John Fleming

Date: 8/21/2025 2:07:00 PM

Enjoyed them all. Hard to pick a favourite. But...if pushed...probably the last one. Five great lines! Particularly loved this: "tousled as my wild,wild hair." Good work done here, Rose. :) john

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/21/2025 2:55:00 PM

I always loved the olden days when romance was at the height of passion, filled with abandon and loyal feelings that lasted. Not like today when relationships fail so often, those days we clung to each other for dear life. Thanks for your visit John I look forward to them :)

Bill Baker

Date: 8/20/2025 10:19:00 PM

Got to be a fireplace or open fire near for romance is upon thee. I like it! Bill

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/21/2025 2:55:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed the romantic escapade Bill :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/20/2025 5:13:00 PM

three beautifully written Tankas, Rose. They were softly romantic and compelling. I just love your poetic voice! Keep writing, hugs Sara

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/20/2025 6:30:00 PM

Thankyou for reading them Sara, hope all is well with you and Bill :)