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"In the house of lovers the music never stops, 
the walls are made of songs & the floor dances"
Quote by: Rumi 

Beloved one you know me like you know the stars 
and as I navigate inside the pathways of your light 
I turn into a million fireflies inside this jar 
of flaming hues, your brilliance is out of sight  

Light of my life, you are the candle of my Empire  
the blaze of my radiance, dear knight  
you are my fire and the flame of my desire, 
the breath that annihilates the night 


January 14, 2023
Sponsor	Regina McIntosh
Contest Name	Beloved Poets

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 1/16/2023 9:53:00 PM
This is SO beautiful! Breathlessly beautiful. A fave, with a star beside it if I could, Mystic Rose, it is so incredibly lovely! <3
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Date: 1/17/2023 6:05:00 PM
Thank you dearest
Date: 1/16/2023 4:43:00 PM
Such Heartfelt passion and Love. I think my heart skipped a beat when reading. Nicely done Vie...
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Date: 1/16/2023 6:13:00 PM
Rumi has a way to unearth any heart even mine Michael, thank you for stopping by :)
Date: 1/15/2023 3:45:00 PM
Very nice poem. Well written :)
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Date: 1/15/2023 5:56:00 PM
Dear Heidi, I always enjoyed Rumi's poetry, thanks for your comment
Date: 1/15/2023 1:47:00 PM
Wow! Wonderfully romantic. Reminding me of my days as a romantic poet: I will dig out one of my old works and publish it now. Such a splendid write! Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 1/15/2023 5:56:00 PM
Give us the romance Joe, we sure need it, :)
Date: 1/15/2023 7:03:00 AM
A lovely write. Thanks for adding the quote from Rumi. As a kid I loved putting fireflies inside a jar and watching their little lights. Have a blessed day...........
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Date: 1/15/2023 5:56:00 PM
Me too Paula, they were magical weren't they, thank you for the visit,
Date: 1/15/2023 6:12:00 AM
What an awesome quote, Vienna! Your tribute-- apt for the great poet-- in ornate vocabulary. You win BIG!!
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Date: 1/15/2023 5:55:00 PM
He was one of my favorites for years now, thanks for stopping by Vijay
Date: 1/15/2023 6:08:00 AM
What a beautiful homage to Rumi, the great Persian poet who wrote poems of great spiritual insight and blazed the hearts of thousands. By following his light, turn into a million fireflies..... ! Lovely image dear Rose.
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Date: 1/15/2023 5:55:00 PM
I always enjoyed Rumi's poetry, he was deep and revealing, thank you for reading
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