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Beloved One

"In the house of lovers the music never stops, the walls are made of songs & the floor dances" Quote by: Rumi Beloved one you know me like you know the stars and as I navigate inside the pathways of your light I turn into a million fireflies inside this jar of flaming hues, your brilliance is out of sight Light of my life, you are the candle of my Empire the blaze of my radiance, dear knight you are my fire and the flame of my desire, the breath that annihilates the night January 14, 2023 Sponsor Regina McIntosh Contest Name Beloved Poets

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Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 1/16/2023 9:53:00 PM

This is SO beautiful! Breathlessly beautiful. A fave, with a star beside it if I could, Mystic Rose, it is so incredibly lovely! <3

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/17/2023 6:05:00 PM

Thank you dearest

Michael Tor

Date: 1/16/2023 4:43:00 PM

Such Heartfelt passion and Love. I think my heart skipped a beat when reading. Nicely done Vie...

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/16/2023 6:13:00 PM

Rumi has a way to unearth any heart even mine Michael, thank you for stopping by :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/15/2023 3:45:00 PM

Very nice poem. Well written :)

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/15/2023 5:56:00 PM

Dear Heidi, I always enjoyed Rumi's poetry, thanks for your comment

Joe Dimino

Date: 1/15/2023 1:47:00 PM

Wow! Wonderfully romantic. Reminding me of my days as a romantic poet: I will dig out one of my old works and publish it now. Such a splendid write! Thank you for sharing.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/15/2023 5:56:00 PM

Give us the romance Joe, we sure need it, :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/15/2023 7:03:00 AM

A lovely write. Thanks for adding the quote from Rumi. As a kid I loved putting fireflies inside a jar and watching their little lights. Have a blessed day...........

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/15/2023 5:56:00 PM

Me too Paula, they were magical weren't they, thank you for the visit,

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/15/2023 6:12:00 AM

What an awesome quote, Vienna! Your tribute-- apt for the great poet-- in ornate vocabulary. You win BIG!!

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/15/2023 5:55:00 PM

He was one of my favorites for years now, thanks for stopping by Vijay

Valsa George

Date: 1/15/2023 6:08:00 AM

What a beautiful homage to Rumi, the great Persian poet who wrote poems of great spiritual insight and blazed the hearts of thousands. By following his light, turn into a million fireflies..... ! Lovely image dear Rose.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/15/2023 5:55:00 PM

I always enjoyed Rumi's poetry, he was deep and revealing, thank you for reading