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Belonging

belonging being needed, wanted because of who you are, besmirch no one or risk becoming adjuvant belonging to no one. bring a smile to a face butterfly kiss says Hi Penned 15/08/2016 for Pleiades B contest

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Date: 9/6/2016 7:21:00 AM
Seren, we all wish to belong...well written... congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
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Date: 8/20/2016 4:51:00 AM
I loved your last line best Seren! Congratulations on your win! : ) 7
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Date: 8/19/2016 8:39:00 PM
Seren, congrats on your win! Your poem touched me with its sensitivity and sincerity .We all want to belong somewhere. Blessings!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/19/2016 10:51:00 PM
thanks Kim....Seren
Date: 8/15/2016 5:35:00 PM
A lovely post Seren. I see it on the winners list
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/17/2016 9:58:00 PM
Hi Tim lol we shall see, Thanks anyway.......Seren
Date: 8/15/2016 5:46:00 AM
What a secured feeling ... Great job ... all the best ...
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/19/2016 10:53:00 PM
Thank you Probir....Seren
Date: 8/15/2016 2:44:00 AM
Very very sweet post.How securing is the feeling to Belong.Lovely.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/15/2016 3:49:00 PM
Aww thanks Charmaine .....Seren
Date: 8/15/2016 2:12:00 AM
:) The theme of belonging is a treasured one for me. Such warm feelings it connotes. You've made the word come to life with this, Seren. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 8/15/2016 2:17:00 AM
Thank you Eileen for your kind words.....Seren