Belonging

belonging

being needed, wanted 
because of who you are,
besmirch no one or risk
becoming adjuvant 
belonging to no one.
bring a smile to a face
butterfly kiss says Hi



Penned 15/08/2016 for Pleiades B contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Scars Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 7:21 AM
Seren, we all wish to belong...well written... congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 4:51 AM
I loved your last line best Seren! Congratulations on your win! : ) 7
Merryman Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 8:39 PM
Seren, congrats on your win! Your poem touched me with its sensitivity and sincerity .We all want to belong somewhere. Blessings!
Roberts Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 10:51 PM
thanks Kim....Seren
Smith Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 5:35 PM
A lovely post Seren. I see it on the winners list
Roberts Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 9:58 PM
Hi Tim lol we shall see, Thanks anyway.......Seren
Gupta Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 5:46 AM
What a secured feeling ... Great job ... all the best ...
Roberts Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 10:53 PM
Thank you Probir....Seren
Chircop Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 2:44 AM
Very very sweet post.How securing is the feeling to Belong.Lovely.
Roberts Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 3:49 PM
Aww thanks Charmaine .....Seren
Manassian Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 2:12 AM
:) The theme of belonging is a treasured one for me. Such warm feelings it connotes. You've made the word come to life with this, Seren. Good luck in the contest.
Roberts Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 2:17 AM
Thank you Eileen for your kind words.....Seren
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