Belonging

The Sun

Belongs to the earth and 
                Moon
Empowering each with beauty
Never missing a day

The Sun

Casts pastel shades
          Upon the horizon
Revealing the fog's presence
    In the distant vale

The Birds

Each sing morn's song
A secret melody to each other
Mankind entertained
              As a bystander

Belonging

Each belongs to the other
        Dependent
A circle that can't be
           Broken

Belonging

To neither family
       separated
Unaccepted in family trees

Intwined

To a family
    Belonging
To earth, heaven, moon, stars, sky and 
    Sun

Belonging
          To God

Sponsor: Kim Morrison
Contest: Just Write
Date written: May 05, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 10:13 AM
LOVELY WIN...LINDA
Chutani Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 12:56 AM
Sara, this is a very nice poem. Each element in the entire universe is yearning to be belonged and loved. I will put this as one of my favorites. Congrats on the win. Mohan
Khan Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 11:53 PM
Congratulations on your win ! :) Wishes---
Callus Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 4:38 PM
This is an excellent example of a 'chain' of ideas; well presented...much enjoyed. Congrats on your fine win. // paul
A. Sharma Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 2:19 PM
Great work Sara ! Congrats on merited win ,, indeed a wonderful write !
Johnson Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 11:32 AM
Well done Sara. One of the best. Love, Joyce
A  Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 9:16 AM
Wonderful, win..... Skat
Mehta Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 6:57 AM
Congratulations on the fine win in the contest Just Write, sara
Morrison Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 6:11 AM
Excellent work!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 10, 2014 at 4:46 AM
:) i love how this comes.. true.. Each and every creation compliments each other.. :) the cycle of life.. :) the ants, mosquitoes and other somewhat at first not useful things for us humans but in the ecosystem they are necessary.. :) and overall all these are creation of our God.. :), olive eloisa.. :)
Shiells Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 2:55 PM
Hi Sara, Gosh I hope you know how well of a writer you really are. It's a pleasure to read your poems. This was exquisite Thanks so much for sharing this gorgeous write with us here. Thank you also for stopping by my page and leaving your kindness as always.! Peace, Deborah
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