Belonging

The Sun

Belongs to the earth and 
                Moon
Empowering each with beauty
Never missing a day

The Sun

Casts pastel shades
          Upon the horizon
Revealing the fog's presence
    In the distant vale

The Birds

Each sing morn's song
A secret melody to each other
Mankind entertained
              As a bystander

Belonging

Each belongs to the other
        Dependent
A circle that can't be
           Broken

Belonging

To neither family
       separated
Unaccepted in family trees

Intwined

To a family
    Belonging
To earth, heaven, moon, stars, sky and 
    Sun

Belonging
          To God

Sponsor: Kim Morrison
Contest: Just Write
Date written: May 05, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/9/2014 10:13:00 AM
LOVELY WIN...LINDA
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Date: 6/9/2014 12:56:00 AM
Sara, this is a very nice poem. Each element in the entire universe is yearning to be belonged and loved. I will put this as one of my favorites. Congrats on the win. Mohan
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Date: 6/8/2014 11:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win ! :) Wishes---
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Date: 6/7/2014 4:38:00 PM
This is an excellent example of a 'chain' of ideas; well presented...much enjoyed. Congrats on your fine win. // paul
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Date: 6/7/2014 2:19:00 PM
Great work Sara ! Congrats on merited win ,, indeed a wonderful write !
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Date: 6/7/2014 11:32:00 AM
Well done Sara. One of the best. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/7/2014 9:16:00 AM
Wonderful, win..... Skat
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Date: 6/7/2014 6:57:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win in the contest Just Write, sara
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Date: 6/7/2014 6:11:00 AM
Excellent work!
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Date: 5/10/2014 4:46:00 AM
:) i love how this comes.. true.. Each and every creation compliments each other.. :) the cycle of life.. :) the ants, mosquitoes and other somewhat at first not useful things for us humans but in the ecosystem they are necessary.. :) and overall all these are creation of our God.. :), olive eloisa.. :)
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Date: 5/5/2014 2:55:00 PM
Hi Sara, Gosh I hope you know how well of a writer you really are. It's a pleasure to read your poems. This was exquisite Thanks so much for sharing this gorgeous write with us here. Thank you also for stopping by my page and leaving your kindness as always.! Peace, Deborah
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