Bells Ring On Christmas

bells ring on christmas

near white-frosted  evergreens . . .

a cardinal sings


Dec. 16, 2019

Writing Challenge, December - Winter Haiku or Senryu

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Neumann Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 5:16 AM
The bird and the pastor singing in unison. Congratulations on your win, Kai
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December 26, 2019 at 6:47 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win! Hugs Eve
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December 26, 2019 at 5:29 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this beautiful haiku ~
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December 26, 2019 at 9:40 AM
Sweet, congrats-Peter
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December 25, 2019 at 2:35 PM
- Congratulations, with your winning poem - Marry Christmas and Happy New Year, Andrea :) - Greetings from // Anne-Lise :)
Carber Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 10:16 AM
Congrats Andrea on your top win!
May Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 6:44 AM
Beautiful, Love the imagery of this write Andrea, Wishing you and yours a Merry Christmas, hugs
May Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 6:44 AM
And Congrats on a great win!
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December 24, 2019 at 12:23 PM
Hi Andrea, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved. Happy Christmas Eve:-) Alexis
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December 24, 2019 at 12:09 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your win. This is a lovely picture. Your words put us right into the scene. I can feel the frosty air and hear the cardinal.
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December 23, 2019 at 8:09 PM
So much, in so few beautiful, words... carved from the air, your skill is well seen. Ann
Anish Avatar
December 18, 2019 at 11:19 AM
Nice haiku!! Please e-mail me your address so I can send you a holiday card! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
DiMino Avatar
December 18, 2019 at 4:35 AM
Beautiful imagery. Very nicely done.
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December 17, 2019 at 10:37 PM
A Complimentary song your poem rings out..This is lovely...
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December 17, 2019 at 10:33 PM
Andrea, Evergreen....crayola crayon from heaven. -Richard
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December 17, 2019 at 5:26 PM
Delicately done, brings Christmas cheer into my mind's eye immediately, Andrea.
Wolf Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 2:55 PM
One is tinkling, the other is tingling! Nice ku, Andrea! :) gw
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December 24, 2019 at 5:52 PM
Back with congrats on your #1 win, Andrea. Richly deserved. Season's best, Gershon
Kannan Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 6:36 AM
Lovely, Andrea... good luck in the contest ...
Adams Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 8:15 PM
beautiful image Andrea...i think this one will top the winner's list... :) hugs
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December 16, 2019 at 6:02 PM
WoW! Andrea, Is there any form that you don't well?In my opinion, you excell in them all. This is a good entry for the contest theme. It is a amazing "Christmas/ Winter" haiku. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your day my friend:-) Alexis
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December 16, 2019 at 5:54 PM
Beautiful, vividly descriptive haiku, Andrea! Janice
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December 16, 2019 at 5:35 PM
Christmas bells ringing, birds singing, evergreens frosted like cake-a truly beautiful haiku, Andrea! Good luck in the contest. :)
Green Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 4:17 PM
Very beautiful and enchanting Andrea.
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December 16, 2019 at 3:37 PM
Absolutely beautiful. I changed my name from Robert Maguire to RunningWolves, because I write under that name on another site and some of my friends there are here as well on soup. Sorry for any confusion this may have caused.
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December 16, 2019 at 3:14 PM
Nice entry in the contest Andrea. Best of luck to you
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