Home » Poems » Andrea Dietrich » Bells Ring On Christmas

Bells Ring On Christmas

bells ring on christmas

near white-frosted  evergreens . . .

a cardinal sings


Dec. 16, 2019

Writing Challenge, December - Winter Haiku or Senryu

Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/27/2019 5:16:00 AM

The bird and the pastor singing in unison. Congratulations on your win, Kai

Eve Roper

Date: 12/26/2019 6:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your awesome win! Hugs Eve

Constance La France

Date: 12/26/2019 5:29:00 PM

Andrea, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this beautiful haiku ~

Peter W Iversen

Date: 12/26/2019 9:40:00 AM

Sweet, congrats-Peter

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/25/2019 2:35:00 PM

- Congratulations, with your winning poem - Marry Christmas and Happy New Year, Andrea :) - Greetings from // Anne-Lise :)

L. J. Carber

Date: 12/25/2019 10:16:00 AM

Congrats Andrea on your top win!

Joseph May

Date: 12/25/2019 6:44:00 AM

Beautiful, Love the imagery of this write Andrea, Wishing you and yours a Merry Christmas, hugs

Joseph May
Date: 12/25/2019 6:44:00 AM

And Congrats on a great win!

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/24/2019 12:23:00 PM

Hi Andrea, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved. Happy Christmas Eve:-) Alexis

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/24/2019 12:09:00 PM

Andrea, Congratulations on your win. This is a lovely picture. Your words put us right into the scene. I can feel the frosty air and hear the cardinal.

Ann Foster

Date: 12/23/2019 8:09:00 PM

So much, in so few beautiful, words... carved from the air, your skill is well seen. Ann

Matthew Anish

Date: 12/18/2019 11:19:00 AM

Nice haiku!! Please e-mail me your address so I can send you a holiday card! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Joe Dimino

Date: 12/18/2019 4:35:00 AM

Beautiful imagery. Very nicely done.

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/17/2019 10:37:00 PM

A Complimentary song your poem rings out..This is lovely...

Quoth Theraven

Date: 12/17/2019 10:33:00 PM

Andrea, Evergreen....crayola crayon from heaven. -Richard

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/17/2019 5:26:00 PM

Delicately done, brings Christmas cheer into my mind's eye immediately, Andrea.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/17/2019 2:55:00 PM

One is tinkling, the other is tingling! Nice ku, Andrea! :) gw

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/24/2019 5:52:00 PM

Back with congrats on your #1 win, Andrea. Richly deserved. Season's best, Gershon

Supraja Kannan

Date: 12/17/2019 6:36:00 AM

Lovely, Andrea... good luck in the contest ...

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/16/2019 8:15:00 PM

beautiful image Andrea...i think this one will top the winner's list... :) hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/16/2019 6:02:00 PM

WoW! Andrea, Is there any form that you don't well?In my opinion, you excell in them all. This is a good entry for the contest theme. It is a amazing "Christmas/ Winter" haiku. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your day my friend:-) Alexis

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/16/2019 5:54:00 PM

Beautiful, vividly descriptive haiku, Andrea! Janice

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 12/16/2019 5:35:00 PM

Christmas bells ringing, birds singing, evergreens frosted like cake-a truly beautiful haiku, Andrea! Good luck in the contest. :)

Chris Green

Date: 12/16/2019 4:17:00 PM

Very beautiful and enchanting Andrea.

Running Wolves

Date: 12/16/2019 3:37:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful. I changed my name from Robert Maguire to RunningWolves, because I write under that name on another site and some of my friends there are here as well on soup. Sorry for any confusion this may have caused.