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Bell's on the Wind

Bits and pieces bits and pieces shattered ground writhes with the moon soft the dirt still wet and warm too soon too soon too soon torn nails shred the bell cord tin the sound in wind wails tinkle, tinkle the might of death, a spasms rise no heart beat but a curse arise, arise, on full moon’s pull to feed a need a zombie hull Bits and pieces bits and pieces shattered ground writhes with the moon soft the dirt still wet and warm too soon too soon too soon no smile, no scream, no blush the rose arm thrust horror births skin with bits of cloth stand now, bone bare in places long in tooth to feed to feed the Blood Moon’s Curse Bits and pieces bits and pieces shattered ground writhes with the moon soft the dirt still wet and warm too soon too soon too soon wait not, want not, run and hide for hunger never ending rises death but not pain and hell cursed they rise too soon. Date: 11/1/13 Poet: Daphne Rising

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Date: 11/30/2013 11:40:00 AM
A very elegant, yet creepy poem, Debbie! I really love this one! It reminded me of "The Premature Burial", by Edgar Allan Poe. I think I will add this to my favorites!...Thank you so much for all of the wonderful comments. I really do appreciate it!
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Date: 11/23/2013 4:18:00 AM
lovely Debbie congrats on your win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 11/22/2013 3:19:00 PM
This poem is well put together. Nice win Debbie...Roger
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Date: 11/22/2013 12:34:00 PM
Very well organized, Debbie. Congrats!
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Date: 11/21/2013 4:31:00 AM
cool..... congratulations debs xx
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Date: 11/20/2013 8:30:00 PM
ha, Nice in seeing this one again.. , Congratulations on your win ~xox~ LINDA
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Date: 11/20/2013 7:24:00 PM
I feel like I'm stuck in a horror movie with no place to hide. Congrats on the win
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Date: 11/20/2013 5:59:00 PM
Great writing and great win. Congratulations on your no. 1 Debbie. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/20/2013 5:22:00 PM
I'm glad Leonora saw the genius of this one. Congrats AGAIN. hahaha and it is up at the top where it belongs.
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Date: 11/20/2013 4:46:00 PM
Debbie, you rock.... . Congratulations with your awesome Zombie win. Stay Alive LOL....... SKAT ~Love
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Date: 11/20/2013 9:21:00 AM
I always adore the way you write your art Debbie, I can feel the sense of eerie, beautiful and amazed at the same time, congrats for the first place, this is extremely splendid! Wishing you a wonderful day there :D hug, Yanny *straight to my fave list :D
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Date: 11/20/2013 8:36:00 AM
I enjoyed this one very much. You created a intresting mood with your words. who is Daphne Rising??
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/20/2013 8:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win.
Date: 11/20/2013 7:46:00 AM
- Interesting to read about Zombies - glad that they are not real! - Congratulations on your winning poem, Debbie !! :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/20/2013 6:53:00 AM
Congratulations my dear friend Debbie Daph on your well-deserved super win in my contest with only one theme, “Zombie”! I extremely love and thoroughly enjoyed your very entertaining and outstanding spooky poem. Thank you so much for your loving support. More blessings! Love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 11/18/2013 9:16:00 AM
Congratulations Debbie...loved this the first time I read it...it is an awesome poem...
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Date: 11/17/2013 4:08:00 PM
I remember this one and it's A VERY WELL DESERVED win. Congrats in PD's contest.
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Date: 11/17/2013 1:25:00 PM
congrats on your win
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Date: 11/17/2013 9:26:00 AM
Congrats Debbie, A wonderful poem and a nice win... Roger
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Date: 11/17/2013 3:03:00 AM
Debbie, , Congratulations & thank you for supporting my contest... always ~LINDA~
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Date: 11/8/2013 4:54:00 PM
Scary zombie poem Debbie, very creepy and full of imagery. Thanks for the feedback, I was afraid that I had missed a direction or two on the ghazal,will make changes.
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Date: 11/8/2013 10:28:00 AM
IT IS JUST WOWWOWOWOWOW I REALLY LIKED YOUR POEM A LOT AND THANKS FOR A NICE COMMENT ON MY POEM
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Date: 11/7/2013 7:46:00 AM
Dear Debbie - Now this is why I never go to horror movies. This poem does not need the screen to bring upon me the creepy creeps. "skin with bits of cloth stand now, bone bare in places" I'm staying out of grave yards. Remember that when I'm gone. (although I guess I'm in no danger if I'm already dead) lvoe, Kathy
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Date: 11/6/2013 4:47:00 AM
Touches one's bell in the heart making it produce a sound supreme!
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Date: 11/5/2013 2:47:00 PM
There is a dark side of the moon ! :) !!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 11/5/2013 12:29:00 PM
Loved how the suspense just kept rising.....nice!!!
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