Notes About The Poem

The painting that inspired this ekphrasis in lanterne sequence

https://www.marcchagall.net/the-birthday.jsp

Bella

He
opened
the window-
in streamed his first
love
with
flowers,
dressed
in white-
she haunted his
art

THE POEM APPEARED IN 'Poiema'- a selection of Ekphrasis poems ( a chapbook  published by QQ Press isbn 1-903203-562)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Carber Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 2:08 PM
I like this--it has that haiku-like feel, and for some reason reminds me of that moment I saw my wife walk down the aisle the day we married.
Strand Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 3:07 PM
Thanks LJ it is a linked lanterne(half American cinquain) which is indeed of that flavour.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 7:58 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Beautiful" write. What a story in few words. Enjoy your win and day writing away..............
Strand Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 9:05 AM
Thanks Paula.
Mcintosh Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 3:47 AM
Congrats and this is a wonderful poem :) God bless you
Strand Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 4:13 AM
Thanks Gina,if you to have link for this topic please soupmail for the blog thank you to Line
La France Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 3:33 AM
Brian, congratulations in Line's, Have You Published contest with this beautiful poem, each line, each word is amazing _Constance
Strand Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 4:12 AM
Thanks Constance,if you to have link for this topic please soupmail for the blog thank you to Line
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