Believe It Or Not

Believe it or not

He swore by the day he sighted the earth
This step he took 
Was not aimed at piercing anyone
But to show his appreciation
At exactly the time (or on time)

Had he known the blessed wouldn't be pleased
With this gesture
He would have 
Hands down
And waved for naught

'What are my mistakes'
He asked
Cos his heart is mixed

This mind is now full with mix feelings

The memory of strange letters that gloomed at his eyes

Believe it or not
He had never wish for anything

If nothing will make him live a simple life
And meet his Creator in good shape
Then he will be satisfied with that hope
Than a hope of something 
Where he wishes for nothing

A.O
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kayode Avatar
February 13, 2014 at 3:42 AM
Congrats on win with this great work Oyewole.
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February 13, 2014 at 4:30 AM
Thanks to have visited, read and commented, Kayode.
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February 12, 2014 at 12:09 PM
great to read this winner Abdulhafeez congratulations
Oyewole Avatar
February 13, 2014 at 4:30 AM
Thanks to have visited, read and commented, Joe.
Mehta Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 9:17 AM
Enjoyed the poem and congrats on the win,
Oyewole Avatar
February 13, 2014 at 4:29 AM
Thanks to have visited, read and commented, Dr R.M.
May Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 9:13 AM
Congrats on a fine win AO
Oyewole Avatar
February 13, 2014 at 4:28 AM
Thanks to have visited, read and commented, J.M.
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February 12, 2014 at 3:28 AM
- Another contest sponsored by: Giorgio V. - "Impress me IV" - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM,A.O. - ENJOYABLE TO READ YOURS AND A PLEASURE TO PARTICIPATE :))) - Anne-Lise :)
Oyewole Avatar
February 13, 2014 at 4:27 AM
Thanks to have visited, read and commented, A-L Andresen..
Carrillo Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 11:37 AM
This is very good. A lot of times we all have those mixed feelings, but they don't last. at the end I only wish for God to forgive my sins. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
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February 13, 2014 at 4:27 AM
Thanks to have visited, read and commented, Lucilla.
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