Believe In Dreams

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felt like UNREAL fantasy, IMAGINARY vision!
a SURREAL evening ...walking with you on a calm village-path!
the tall SHADOWY trees stopped waving their branches, all hushed!
haloed stars in neon sky kept watching us .. dazzling with hope in azure bliss,
ETHEREAL silence fell! but the hearts were racing!
we kept walking in the tranquil blessedness of the whispering night. 
                                                                                                              
                         the tender lavender memory never faded!

a HAZY day ..witnessed exuberantly uninterrupted pouring rain,
splashes from the mighty waterfalls descended and drenched us on the DREAMLIKE boat,
gentle strokes of raindrops created  a magical cadence of rhapsody,
eyes gently on each other, held hands tight, a ruby-crowned kinglet crooned inside me ~ 
my fluttering senses enchanted with a TRANCELIKE feeling,
my heart never pulsated the way it did, rapt with a profound sense of exhilaration -                                                                                                               
                                 Is this all a mystifying carousel of dreams? 

                                       

                                          FIRST PLACE
                                          May 26, 2021
                  For "Writing Prompt -Dreamlike" Poetry Contest
                            Sponsor: Constance La France
 Required Words: Unreal, Imaginary, Surreal, Shadowy, Ethereal, Hazy, Dreamlike, Trancelike

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/3/2021 10:49:00 AM

Positively enchanting my friend. A dream state juxtaposed with weather and very creative images - "tender lavender memory," "mystifying carousel of dreams" just to name a couple. Thank you for inviting us to share this lovely experience with you. Congratulations! Sending you a hug and blessings.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/3/2021 9:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write down a pretty path with a waterfall. Wish I was by your water. Have a blessed day.............

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/3/2021 10:12:00 AM

Dear Paula, thank you very much for reading my poem. It's Niagara Falls, Paula, on a rainy day - the falls I am describing. Really appreciate your inspiring comments. Love ~ Mala.