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felt like UNREAL fantasy, IMAGINARY vision! a SURREAL evening ...walking with you on a calm village-path! the tall SHADOWY trees stopped waving their branches, all hushed! haloed stars in neon sky kept watching us .. dazzling with hope in azure bliss, ETHEREAL silence fell! but the hearts were racing! we kept walking in the tranquil blessedness of the whispering night.                                                                                                                 the tender lavender memory never faded! a HAZY day ..witnessed exuberantly uninterrupted pouring rain, splashes from the mighty waterfalls descended and drenched us on the DREAMLIKE boat, gentle strokes of raindrops created  a magical cadence of rhapsody, eyes gently on each other, held hands tight, a ruby-crowned kinglet crooned inside me ~  my fluttering senses enchanted with a TRANCELIKE feeling, my heart never pulsated the way it did, rapt with a profound sense of exhilaration -                                                                                                               Is this all a mystifying carousel of dreams?  FIRST PLACE May 26, 2021 For "Writing Prompt -Dreamlike" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France Required Words: Unreal, Imaginary, Surreal, Shadowy, Ethereal, Hazy, Dreamlike, Trancelike

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Date: 6/3/2021 10:49:00 AM
Positively enchanting my friend. A dream state juxtaposed with weather and very creative images - "tender lavender memory," "mystifying carousel of dreams" just to name a couple. Thank you for inviting us to share this lovely experience with you. Congratulations! Sending you a hug and blessings.
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Date: 6/3/2021 9:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write down a pretty path with a waterfall. Wish I was by your water. Have a blessed day.............
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/3/2021 10:12:00 AM
Dear Paula, thank you very much for reading my poem. It's Niagara Falls, Paula, on a rainy day - the falls I am describing. Really appreciate your inspiring comments. Love ~ Mala.
Date: 6/3/2021 7:59:00 AM
Malabika, great story and imagery. Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed reading. My warmest wishes. God bless you. <3
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Date: 6/3/2021 10:10:00 AM
Thank you, Eve. Glad you enjoyed. Really appreciate your lovely comment. Love ~ Mala
Date: 6/3/2021 3:04:00 AM
Your poem took me to a magical world Mala... Absolutely beautiful... using all the highlighted words... Enjoyed reading... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 6/2/2021 3:07:00 PM
Mala, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Challenge,and I like your image too, love - Constance
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Date: 6/2/2021 12:01:00 PM
You have a very beautiful way of narrating. Very Special. Congratulations!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/2/2021 12:05:00 PM
Thank you so much. So delighted to know you found the narration special! Love and BW ~ Mala
Date: 5/30/2021 2:27:00 AM
So dreamy!!! "my heart never pulsated the way it did, rapt with a profound sense of exhilaration"..Splendid line. Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 5/30/2021 5:24:00 AM
Thanks, JCB. Really appreciate your inspiring comment.

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