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Belated Bliss

There was a dense maiden of Madore. Who could not despise men more. She saw them as barbaric They turned her hysteric 'Til she sensed what they’re good for.

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/25/2015 1:54:00 AM

G'day Paul... ah yes Paul, us blokes are great at multi tasking... sometimes. Thanks for another of your fine limericks. Lindsay

Paul Schneiter
Date: 3/29/2015 9:37:00 PM

Thank you, Lindsay. Guess what? I've taken to calling my pals "blokes," and it's all your fault. Oh, such fun.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/24/2015 3:39:00 PM

You made me smile with this witty write Paul :-) Hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/24/2015 6:49:00 PM

Oh Paul you are too kind! I have had a few days break from soup and writing and commenting:-) Hugs jan xx

Paul Schneiter
Date: 3/24/2015 6:46:00 PM

Jan, I owe you a lot of smiles as well as a lot of treasured poetic memories. As always, I value and appreciate your comments, including, of course, this one.

Anastasia Denny

Date: 3/24/2015 9:56:00 AM

Seems like most woman want men for sex or to do the work around the house for them lol

Paul Schneiter
Date: 3/24/2015 3:25:00 PM

Thanks for your thoughtful comment, Anastasia. I have a friend who likes to say (not directly addressing your comment but still relevant, I think) "Any man who says he's boss at home will lie about other things, too."

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 3/23/2015 11:12:00 PM

She needed her oil changed?? {Grins}

Paul Schneiter
Date: 3/23/2015 11:18:00 PM

Janet, that's it! You have identified (and in short order) the one thing men are good for. Thank you. (Reminds me of my widow neighbor's saying, "A woman needs a man like a fish needs a bicycle."