Belated Bliss

There was a dense maiden of Madore.
Who could not despise men more.
She saw them as barbaric
They turned her hysteric
'Til she sensed what they’re good for.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Laurie Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 1:54 AM
G'day Paul... ah yes Paul, us blokes are great at multi tasking... sometimes. Thanks for another of your fine limericks. Lindsay
Schneiter Avatar
March 29, 2015 at 9:37 PM
Thank you, Lindsay. Guess what? I've taken to calling my pals "blokes," and it's all your fault. Oh, such fun.
Allison Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 3:39 PM
You made me smile with this witty write Paul :-) Hugs jan xx
Allison Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 6:49 PM
Oh Paul you are too kind! I have had a few days break from soup and writing and commenting:-) Hugs jan xx
Schneiter Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 6:46 PM
Jan, I owe you a lot of smiles as well as a lot of treasured poetic memories. As always, I value and appreciate your comments, including, of course, this one.
Denny Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 9:56 AM
Seems like most woman want men for sex or to do the work around the house for them lol
Schneiter Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 3:25 PM
Thanks for your thoughtful comment, Anastasia. I have a friend who likes to say (not directly addressing your comment but still relevant, I think) "Any man who says he's boss at home will lie about other things, too."
Cervenka Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 11:12 PM
She needed her oil changed?? {Grins}
Schneiter Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 11:18 PM
Janet, that's it! You have identified (and in short order) the one thing men are good for. Thank you. (Reminds me of my widow neighbor's saying, "A woman needs a man like a fish needs a bicycle."
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