Beings From the Planet Bob

 
I had spent time decorating my home for Christmas Day, but felt forlorn when I should be quite gay; the blinking lights on the tree were bright and pretty, as I wept tears of sadness holding my sweet kitty; you see, I am all alone now all have died ! I fell asleep in front of a smoldering fire place, waking with tangled hair to find an elf face; but this elf had real jewels in his spikey hair, well, you are not really the answer to my prayer; you see, I am all alone now all have died ! Suddenly, a tiny beautiful fairy appeared to sit beside him, and they began to sing loudly a Christmas hymn; stop, I begged you are off key for heavens sake, and can you not see I am full of heartbreak; you see, I am all alone now all have died ! Well, not anymore silly they both said at the same time, I looked and noticed she also had jewels sublime, they heard my weeping and they just had to come; what are your names please and where are you from, you see, I am alone now all have died ! He is Donica and I am Evadne from planet BOB, you see visiting sad people is our forever job; this odd little couple beings really tickled my funny bone. it was so NICE to not be visiting a headstone; you see I am all alone now all have died ! So, all Christmas Day we sang all kinds of songs, mostly off key but with the joy where it belongs; but the next morning my house was stone cold, except for the jewels left- for me to forever hold ! __________________________ December 12, 2020 Poetry/Rhyme/Beings From The Planet BOB Copyright Protected, ID 12-1311-466-12 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, Fantasy with fictional beings sponsor, Caren Krutsinger, Judged 01/02/21 First Place
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Goldsmith Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 8:06 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a fun an creative story. "Love It" Enjoy your win. Today, have joy/blessings.............
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January 5, 2021 at 10:34 AM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations, and the compliment _Constance
Stebbings Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 6:15 AM
Congratulations on your top place, Constance with this thoughtful poem and a bright ending. // Barry.
La France Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 10:34 AM
Barry, thanks for the congratulations, and compliment _Constance
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January 3, 2021 at 2:47 PM
Congratulation, Constance, on your Top Win, for this lovely poetic tale with smooth flow.
La France Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 10:14 PM
Newton, thanks for the congratulations and compliment _Constance
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January 3, 2021 at 12:54 PM
Congratulations Constance on your win with this delightful Christmas poem/story. Belle
La France Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 1:34 PM
Belle, thank you for the congratulations and the compliment _Constance
Roper Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 10:13 AM
Congratulations on you awesome win, Constance, great creative poem. Hope your feeling better. Hugs Eve
La France Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 1:35 PM
Eve, thank you for the congratulations and compliment, yes, I am feeling better, thanks _Constance
Johnson Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 6:12 AM
Congrats. I like this very much. Blessings.
La France Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 1:35 PM
Curtis, thanks for the nice comment and congrats, appreciate _Constance
Sands Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 2:20 PM
Excellent poem. Well written Constance ! Thank God for the Fairy and the Elf. Take care :)
La France Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 9:20 AM
Heidi, thanks for the compliment on my poem and the comment _Constance
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