Being You

nothing to see
but tears on me
from bullying 
and from other things
parent divorces
and siblings death
i am just depressed
straight to the head
i got nothing else to loose
except my life and you
i wouldnt commit suicide
it would hurt you to
maybe i got nothing
or my life maybe be a waste
but  understand from stuff i go through
that i really got to stay 
help my friends out
get my parents together
and help the world
rejoice like a spring flower
and let it grow in peace
and make everything great
you got to love all
while every one hates
every one might try to bring you down
or try to turn your world upside down
but make it a better place
by making it positive with little mistakes
just keep yourself happy
and help all around
just be yourself 
and that will help you through
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Manassian Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 7:51 AM
DYLAN!!! This is fantastic! You ROCK! :) I'm so so proud of you! You are like this in real life, Dylan...always helping people out, always defending, always believing! :) Figured out how to respond to comments yet? Get moving!!! :) Hope Shereen is having fun over at your place! HUGS
Manassian Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 11:33 AM
hahahaha thank you auntie and yea i know how to respond now
Ramacher Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 11:50 PM
Wow great poem. Check your spelling on the 13th line (gt to got). I very much like how you start with a problem and then solve it through your poetry. I could almost hear this being a rap song.
Manassian Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 11:33 AM
thank you so much and yea i love rap music
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