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nothing to see but tears on me from bullying and from other things parent divorces and siblings death i am just depressed straight to the head i got nothing else to loose except my life and you i wouldnt commit suicide it would hurt you to maybe i got nothing or my life maybe be a waste but understand from stuff i go through that i really got to stay help my friends out get my parents together and help the world rejoice like a spring flower and let it grow in peace and make everything great you got to love all while every one hates every one might try to bring you down or try to turn your world upside down but make it a better place by making it positive with little mistakes just keep yourself happy and help all around just be yourself and that will help you through

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Date: 8/28/2013 7:51:00 AM
DYLAN!!! This is fantastic! You ROCK! :) I'm so so proud of you! You are like this in real life, Dylan...always helping people out, always defending, always believing! :) Figured out how to respond to comments yet? Get moving!!! :) Hope Shereen is having fun over at your place! HUGS
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Dylan Manassian
Date: 8/29/2013 11:33:00 AM
hahahaha thank you auntie and yea i know how to respond now
Date: 8/27/2013 11:50:00 PM
Wow great poem. Check your spelling on the 13th line (gt to got). I very much like how you start with a problem and then solve it through your poetry. I could almost hear this being a rap song.
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Dylan Manassian
Date: 8/29/2013 11:33:00 AM
thank you so much and yea i love rap music

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