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With hands outstretched, Lifted a small distance. Palms to the sun, warmth Felt, heartfelt. Eyes aimed At the light, all seeing. You are, embody who you Want to be. Who you see To be. Make your choice, Yours to make, you see? Whoever says you’re maimed Fails everything, it’s etched In your whole being: You are who I am seeing, Complete and whole to me. *** April 13, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Ronald A. Williams

Date: 2/16/2018 12:23:00 PM

Nice write, touching indeed.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/18/2017 11:16:00 AM

Exceptional Beauty dear Darren..A fave. Of course.

Darren White
Date: 4/18/2017 11:41:00 AM

Thank you Charmaine! <3

Sara Ella

Date: 4/15/2017 3:05:00 PM

I wish to frame and place your poem on a wall in a place that it can be read EVERY DAY :) A very good message you have written in beautiful form, my friend. <3

Darren White
Date: 4/17/2017 2:03:00 PM

Thanks Sara <3

Anil Deo

Date: 4/15/2017 3:51:00 AM

yes, we better believe it. "God is not a man that he should lie ..." NUMBERS 23:19. He loves each one of us as His masterpieces. Since humans love so selfishly, we can't begin to understand that in Jesus, we are totally accepted by God as is. Then, we start walking with Jesus (and bear FRUIT for others=testimony). He first loves us ...U are so right.U have REVELATION, amen. thanks --- healing is His children's bread. Shalom

Darren White
Date: 4/15/2017 10:19:00 AM

Dankie, Anil.

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/14/2017 1:36:00 AM

The pure humanity of your words are a treasure to live Darren, thank you for blessing us with them...

Darren White
Date: 4/14/2017 3:53:00 AM

Charlie, thank you so very much for your kind words!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/13/2017 10:05:00 PM

Not only is this beautiful and true, very relate-able to me!

Darren White
Date: 4/13/2017 11:57:00 PM

And to me my friend, it is!

Doug Vinson

Date: 4/13/2017 9:21:00 PM

Right on, dude. : ) The unlived life - that which we cannot yet attain - how close are we, and can we reach it? We are becoming.

Darren White
Date: 4/13/2017 11:56:00 PM

Hey there, Doug. We are, powerful comment, my friend :)

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 4/13/2017 7:38:00 PM

Darren, your wonderful poem reminded of 'The Help' when Abilene is trying to teach the little girl to be loving to all people and says; "You is smart, you is kind, you is important." You are very important my friend, and your humanity shines in you poetry:) Amitiés

Darren White
Date: 4/13/2017 11:55:00 PM

Anne-Marie, what wonderful words you have for me, you make me smile, thank you :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/13/2017 6:27:00 PM

Beautifully written Truth, Darren :)

Darren White
Date: 4/13/2017 11:54:00 PM

Thank you so much, Heidi :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 4/13/2017 5:08:00 PM

SUCH IS THE PROMISE FOR EACH UPON BIRTH MY FRIEND. Truly great verses leading to a positive and very much needed result in this dark world.. Definite 7 and a fav...

Darren White
Date: 4/13/2017 11:54:00 PM

Robert! I am honestly honoured for this compliment coming from such a great poet as yourself, thank you :)

Charlie Gregory

Date: 4/13/2017 3:35:00 PM

This poem really is heartfelt and makes a perfect and humanly beautiful point.

Darren White
Date: 4/13/2017 11:53:00 PM

Thank you for your wonderful comment, Charlie :)

Chris Green

Date: 4/13/2017 3:03:00 PM

Love the form and the message in this one my friend. Really nicely done.

Darren White
Date: 4/13/2017 11:53:00 PM

Thanks Chris, happy you like it :)