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Being Killed By a Drunk Driver

~Someone is killed by a drunk driver every fifty-three minutes~ My true nightmare, I’m stuck and caught, to not drink and drive I was taught- But the fear I hold is dying by someone else who’s drunk driving- Crushed in a smashed up car, I fought. I tell myself it’s not their fault, but truth be told this fear they brought. If I forgive I’d be lying… -my true nightmare Through good council ease I have sought, but apprehension will not halt- panic in cars leaves me crying, to cease this fear, I keep trying- my totaled car leaves me distraught… -my true nightmare Rondeau: Rhyme Scheme: A-A-B-B-A /A-A-B-C /A-A-B-B-A C 8 syllables in each line C is the first 4 syllables of the first line and repeated at the end of the second and third stanza You Greatest Fear Sponsor: Lewis Raynes Date Written: September 27, 2016

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Date: 10/12/2016 12:57:00 PM
VERY scary indeed Luloo many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/11/2016 8:08:00 PM
This is so mega true, and scary, and almost out of our control. it's a real fear that I loved congratulations with ur win luloo
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Date: 10/11/2016 8:36:00 PM
thank you so much Lewis! I am so grateful you found it winning worthy! :)-luloo

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