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Being Invisible

Being Invisible I live within the invisible reciprocal realm Directed divisible via vessels heading helm A quantum quixotic thru magnetic movements Meaningless myopic of expanding exponents For if you touch me I can not feel And if you comfort me I will begin to heal I am the unseen that sees forever Banished between the noxious never Coated in camouflage a chameleon in vogue A marginal mirage a renegade rogue Can you see me? For I am here And if you find me I will shed a tear Sleeping thru timorous time a fading fool I awaken a faceless mime in a punitive pool A ghost in the abyss of marooned mirrors A misguided miss floating in the zeros So come closer to the mirror My face then becomes clearer For you and I now stand nearer Who is the taker and who the giver? In these illusions of enigmatic error. 02.16.2017 Jamie's interesting contest 1... Contest Sponsored by: Jamie Pan Theme...Being Invisible AT LEAST 25 lines in length

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Date: 2/16/2017 11:49:00 PM
Sounds like Scoty hit the wrong button when trying to beam this poor soul up. Well wishes in the contest...
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Date: 2/16/2017 9:59:00 AM
Very cool poem, Wingman. Your poems are always easy to identify. I love your style! Good luck!
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Date: 2/16/2017 7:01:00 AM
Thais was fantastic WW. I love the form of this and the questions it poses to the readers mind.
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Date: 2/16/2017 3:34:00 AM
- A intresant question at the end - Very well written W.W. ..... a winning poem I believe .... good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/16/2017 2:53:00 AM
Amazing masterpiece you've woven with your words, WW:) a 7:)
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