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Being Invisible

Here I am, sitting in front of my computer, Figuring out a better way to finish my work sooner When suddenly, I turn around, Only with a hopeless longing to be found I get up and walk around, but alas, unnoticed, I desperately run to my friends, I believe to be closest They look at me, or right through me? I feel soulless…its just the beginning of invisibility. I am so alone, while standing in this crowd, My voice is unheard even when I cry out loud. There is a fear inside me, its really scary, Its crawling like a spider, oh! It has got me! Being invisible is painful, It is slowly crushing me. I am trapped beneath it, Will someone ever discover me? 26th April 2016 for contest, Sponsor: SKAT A #NOTE: This poem is based on personal experience. There are people who feel lost at the place where they work. They will relate to this and all those who are want more out of life but feel stuck.

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Date: 4/28/2016 12:50:00 AM
Hi Bihu, Congrats on your awesome Being Invisible win...Love LINDA
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Bihu Johri
Date: 4/29/2016 11:25:00 PM
Thanks a lot Linda! :)
Date: 4/26/2016 11:38:00 AM
Bihu, that was a great write. Congrats on your placing in the contest.
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Bihu Johri
Date: 4/29/2016 11:24:00 PM
Thank you Karam :)
Date: 4/26/2016 10:40:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Bihu Johri
Date: 4/26/2016 10:51:00 AM
Thanku so much BL!! :)
Date: 4/26/2016 9:49:00 AM
Nice write Bihu.
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Bihu Johri
Date: 4/26/2016 10:50:00 AM
Thanks James! Its great to see how poetrysoup poets appreciate one another..it was really nice to see your comment :)
Date: 4/26/2016 8:48:00 AM
A well written one...congrats on your placement, Bihu.
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Bihu Johri
Date: 4/26/2016 10:47:00 AM
Thanku so much for your comment Moon!!
Date: 4/26/2016 8:32:00 AM
This was a deep entry, Bihu, Congratulations on your Invisible win. I thank you for the entry. I have a blog up, describing the experience of running my first premiere contest. blog name--- >"My first experience was not as easy ... :( DEPRESSION" drop by and enjoy the few I did place. Forever **SKAT**
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Bihu Johri
Date: 4/26/2016 10:45:00 AM
Thanks a lot for this opportunity! It was great writing for your contest..waiting for more :)

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