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(A poem a friend once asked me to write about being a Highly Sensitive Person)

Being Hsp

Being HSP:


Sound drowns out sound, I'm found overwhelmed,
...there's a chaos that's building inside.
My thoughts won't relent, my emotions are spent,
...and my angst just can't be denied.

With lights that are bright, and pains out of sight, 
...this souls ecosystem is a fragile thing.
Like I'm frozen in winter, set to shatter and splinter,
...desperate for the early onset of spring.

My mind has been had, so "Am I broken too bad?"
...the nagging question stirs from within.
But, don't fret for me, nor yourself you must see, 
...this isn't where our story comes to end.

We're stronger than we know, don't cut yourself low,
...being what we are is a privilege to few.
With gifts we have plenty, and we're heartfelt to many,
...those who care know there's no one like you.

Some of this may not fit, but others do, you must admit,
...we all have our own strong proclivity.
With our rich inner lives, and on subtleties thrive
...we have imagination and creativity.

Some of us are wise, some are passionate, some advise,
...we are as beautifully arrayed as the stars.
We are empathetic, some artistic, while others scientific
...lift your chin, don't give in, own HSP, it is ours.

Your compassion is unique, with kindness others seek,
...Those who know you set you apart.
Don't regret these great gifts, your word it uplifts,
...people look up to you for your deep heart.

I must leave you with this, whether unhappy or in bliss,
...we are bigger than the weaknesses we see.
Don't forget that we're rare, with this trait that we share,
...I'm thankful that you're in this with me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Hopper Avatar
November 29, 2019 at 8:25 AM
I can’t believe What I just read. First of all, this is a beautiful poem! My gosh, though, at how I can relate. I am glad that you wrote this from your experience and I know it to be true.
Zerlaut Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 8:52 PM
Being a Highly Sensitive person has been a struggle for me, but it's been more of a blessing than anything. I am an admin of a group of over five thousand who share in many of the traits listed. I'm glad you liked the poem. Thanks for responding.
Kwalton Avatar
April 24, 2019 at 8:17 PM
From one HSP to another, thank you. Beautifully written expressing what defines us as well as educating those who are not HSP.
Zerlaut Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 7:55 AM
It was written in a bit of haste and I haven't really taken any time to refine it. But, I'm glad you like it. :)
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