Being Apart

Go but don’t leave me
your touch constant in my mind,
take the air i will
from your breath you placed in me
that’s all i need, till next time.

© Harry J Horsman 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
October 13, 2013 at 3:28 PM
some people are never apart harry xx
Zamalea Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 9:48 PM
Harry, It is indeed remarkable. Lovely touch. Thanks George
Chircop Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 5:21 PM
Very romantoc Harry..beautifully penned-Charma
Johnson Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 1:31 PM
I can sense the beating in your heart. Each breath you take when your apart. The life blood flows within your veins. Awaiting when her love light rains. Peace. :)
Oyewole Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 3:29 AM
Romantic and beautiful. Well done Harry.
Jones Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 1:06 PM
Sounds like the breath of love....sweet..
Devnath  Avatar
May 12, 2013 at 11:49 AM
Excellent expression of love, way is totally exceptional. Loved always my sweet friend, bl
A   Avatar
May 11, 2013 at 4:28 PM
Hello Harry, stopping by to say hi and wish you a happy mothers' day... xox~ Linda
Manassian Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 2:59 PM
Romantic as always, Harry! :)
Bacha Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 8:34 AM
A Woa Harry, short but it feels a forever . Loved reading it. Terry xoxo
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 8:23 AM
Hi like this one Harry xx
Carrillo Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 2:37 PM
Being Apart; Nice title, being apart is not good when you love someone. I enjoyed this very much.... Lucy
Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 10:19 AM
love this one, Harry. I am happy that I saw it on my way off the computer this morning. Gotta get ready for my class now. Luv, Andrea
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