Being a Bee

It’s not easy to be a bee Our crowded view of life Sometimes the only things I see Are trouble, toil and strife We search to find the source of food Then hurry to the hive We hype the others in the mood With waggle dance and jive The queen, protected and aloof Not like all the others She is the sign and living proof When smoke comes and smothers Work and waggle, my daily chore Then search a place to hide Being a bee is so much more When dodging pesticide I’m a worker, and not a drone I hope that you can see When you harvest sweet honeycomb It tough being a bee

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Date: 6/18/2022 4:25:00 PM
this is cute, Andy. Lots of bee poems buzzing about. Can't wait to see who is Queen or King bee!
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Andy Chunn
Date: 7/25/2022 6:22:00 PM
Sorry to be so slow responding. This one just buzzed by me. :-) Thanks!
Date: 6/14/2022 7:27:00 PM
This is definitely going to be on the winners list Andy. I appreciate bees so much I have donated to save them. When we save them we are saving ourselves. Honey has such healing properties it has probably been used since it was discovered eons ago. I love your content and flair you use to express how important they are to our existence. This poem is a keeper and Fave! Blessings xxoo
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Andy Chunn
Date: 6/18/2022 4:20:00 PM
Thanks Connie.....they are very important....and many don't seem to understand. Maybe I'm influenced by that biology major...who knows. Thanks again.
Date: 6/4/2022 10:37:00 AM
Great pen on the flight of the bee, such nice rhyme and flow with good imagery too. Blessings,Gordon
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Andy Chunn
Date: 6/4/2022 5:05:00 PM
Well Gordon, thank you for taking time to read my poem. I had fun writing it. I stay "busy as a bee" but enjoy reading the poetry here on PS. Take care.
Date: 6/2/2022 8:58:00 PM
Great perspective of a bee. Thanks for not honey coating it! Keep up the good work.
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Andy Chunn
Date: 6/3/2022 8:20:00 AM
Thank you David. I am thankful you took the time to read my poem. Best wishes.
Date: 5/27/2022 8:05:00 AM
I bee-lieve it! Nice Bee poem, Andy. Good luck in contest!
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Andy Chunn
Date: 5/27/2022 7:25:00 PM
Thank you Ann - for reading my poem.
Date: 5/26/2022 12:59:00 PM
I think most of us in this life are workers. I enjoyed reading your metaphoric lines. Sara
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Andy Chunn
Date: 5/26/2022 3:07:00 PM
Thank you Sara....I appreciate your time. Wishing you the best!
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