Being 2


B eyond imagination
E ntering our universe
I nside unforeseen crafts
N eglecting to be caught
G alaxy entrepreneurs




11-3-11
Contest:Being /By Paula Swanson

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Carol Sunshine Brown

November 16, 2011 at 12:21 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in the Being contest Dan. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

November 11, 2011 at 11:56 AM

A creative write here Dan.Congrats on your win.

Poet Destroyer A

November 11, 2011 at 1:21 AM

DAN~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, WITH YOUR entry FOR PAULA SWANSONS, CONTEST... Have a wonderful VETERANS DAY @;- GOD BLESS,..p.d.

Joyce Johnson

November 10, 2011 at 9:27 PM

Delightful and concise. Congratulations Dan. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

November 10, 2011 at 8:34 PM

Cool phrase: Galaxy entrepreneurs!! And congrats on your win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 10, 2011 at 8:27 PM

Congrats Dan on a top ten win for a top notch entry luv..knew this one would do well luv..

John Aaron Green

November 7, 2011 at 9:59 AM

nice,,,,,just making my rounds, and its great to read your poems,,,its raining here in okahoma,,,so im catching up with everyone today.....

Elizabeth Wesley

November 6, 2011 at 3:11 PM

Short and sweet with an interesting tale. I admire the ability to do these different categories of poetry but don't have much luck myself. Wish you success in the contest my friend.

Dan Kearley

November 6, 2011 at 7:22 PM

What? You don't have the ability? Come on? Your silly! :-)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 6, 2011 at 8:31 AM

excellent Acrostic Dan..explicit wording conveys deep thoughts..especially that last line.. good luck in the contest luv..

Dan Kearley

November 6, 2011 at 11:27 AM

Thank you Sweetheart :-) That last line is kinda wild.

Carolyn Devonshire

November 4, 2011 at 1:02 PM

Ah, memories of the innocent years emerge in your acrostic, Dan. Toddlers are blessed with an untainted view of society. Love the way you call them "Galaxy entrepreneurs." Surely a winner for Paula's fine contest. Love, Carolyn

Dan Kearley

November 4, 2011 at 1:55 PM

I feel yours is the winner. :-) Mine I already wrote one acrostic to the word Being a while back.So I had to come up with something different.And this is what came out. Ta Da!..