Being 2


B eyond imagination
E ntering our universe
I nside unforeseen crafts
N eglecting to be caught
G alaxy entrepreneurs




11-3-11
Contest:Being /By Paula Swanson

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/16/2011 12:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in the Being contest Dan. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 11/11/2011 11:56:00 AM

A creative write here Dan.Congrats on your win.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/11/2011 1:21:00 AM

DAN~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, WITH YOUR entry FOR PAULA SWANSONS, CONTEST... Have a wonderful VETERANS DAY @;- GOD BLESS,..p.d.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/10/2011 9:27:00 PM

Delightful and concise. Congratulations Dan. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/10/2011 8:34:00 PM

Cool phrase: Galaxy entrepreneurs!! And congrats on your win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/10/2011 8:27:00 PM

Congrats Dan on a top ten win for a top notch entry luv..knew this one would do well luv..

John Aaron Green

Date: 11/7/2011 9:59:00 AM

nice,,,,,just making my rounds, and its great to read your poems,,,its raining here in okahoma,,,so im catching up with everyone today.....

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/6/2011 3:11:00 PM

Short and sweet with an interesting tale. I admire the ability to do these different categories of poetry but don't have much luck myself. Wish you success in the contest my friend.

Dan Kearley
Date: 11/6/2011 7:22:00 PM

What? You don't have the ability? Come on? Your silly! :-)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/6/2011 8:31:00 AM

excellent Acrostic Dan..explicit wording conveys deep thoughts..especially that last line.. good luck in the contest luv..

Dan Kearley
Date: 11/6/2011 11:27:00 AM

Thank you Sweetheart :-) That last line is kinda wild.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/4/2011 1:02:00 PM

Ah, memories of the innocent years emerge in your acrostic, Dan. Toddlers are blessed with an untainted view of society. Love the way you call them "Galaxy entrepreneurs." Surely a winner for Paula's fine contest. Love, Carolyn

Dan Kearley
Date: 11/4/2011 1:55:00 PM

I feel yours is the winner. :-) Mine I already wrote one acrostic to the word Being a while back.So I had to come up with something different.And this is what came out. Ta Da!..