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Behold the Secret Crush

Had you moved a little bit closer, You would have heard me loud and clear. Perceived this chaos and din I’m rumbling from within. Throbbing your name like drum from the start, I am her beating heart. Had you listened to me intensely, You would have known this fantasy. I’ve dreamt of you night and day, Oh, yearning secretly. I beg of you, to me please be kind, I am her foolish mind. Had you looked deeper into her eyes, You would have seen the love that sighs. I’m the window to her core, It’s you whom she adore. Yes, I witness how you make her whole, I am her wishful soul. My secret divulged all three of them, Way past the facade of this femme. Childish whim, look what you’ve done, Alas, this ain’t no fun! Having you near me I feel the rush, ‘Coz you’re my secret crush. © Arabelle Sanchez-Grospe 07242014

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Date: 8/22/2014 10:24:00 AM
Very beautifully done Arabelle. The progressive sequencing in your poem is articulated very well. Enjoyed it!! Cheers, Gary
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Date: 8/16/2014 1:40:00 AM
Great write in the form used. Well done .....Seren
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Date: 8/14/2014 3:24:00 PM
What a feeling having a crush, even better when it's reciprocated. Form captured and written splendidly, James .........
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Date: 8/11/2014 12:35:00 AM
oops..just reread you title..those secrets take me back quite a few years.
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Date: 8/11/2014 12:31:00 AM
Three of my favourite subjects in one poem. No hiding behind a facade here..if he can't face your honesty then he's not for you. Trust you are being honest with him. Intimate and revealing. Thank you Ara
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Date: 8/3/2014 7:51:00 AM
These are fantastic Ara...it is hard enough to do one... I love how you brought it all together... Hugs Tim
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Date: 7/25/2014 12:02:00 AM
A truly great write. Passionate and so well written. Shame on any guy that wouldn't throw rose petals at your feet and beg for your attentions! BBravoooooooooooo!!!!
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Ara Belle
Date: 7/27/2014 3:44:00 PM
Thank you, Robert. LoveLots, Ara
Date: 7/24/2014 10:50:00 AM
Ah awesome, we all have them crushes, I did your nonets, what a great job girl :)
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Ara Belle
Date: 7/27/2014 3:44:00 PM
Thanks for the compliment! LoveLots, Ara
Date: 7/24/2014 10:21:00 AM
Go Tell him Arabelle some men need pointing in the right direction my friend !! hugs Jan xxx
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Ara Belle
Date: 7/27/2014 3:44:00 PM
:)

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