Behold Beatrice, Pitcairn

Behold Beatrice, Pitcairn
the paradise sunsets lie in Tahiti
sunrise, the folly of Easter
islands, sanitoriums, deluded, denuded
limbos and purgatories, the never evermore
Polynesian metaphors transmigrate my mind
O to graze with the deer, dear
the tree never falls silently
lizards scatter, birds scurry to flight
i could never buy into falling silence
let alone fate of Galileo's descending weights
church theologians preferring an atheist Aristhrottle
forgive me for being sententious dear
no pity for Cyrano
the hidden Darcy 
in another failed Benedick in port
without Dante's delusions
love with no embrace
Service, woman, a slightly tainted saint
Tennyson's wound that never heals
Petrarch, Augustine, it grows insane
ah the vicissitudes, where was i
yes, leaving metaphors and literate men

your laughter starts in those ignescent eyes
ignition, brush fires of rippling ballerinas
facial muscles lost in abandonment
to some elfish music i see, never hear
lips widening, bursting rubaiyat pandemonium
i adore your infectious risibility
it is your amatory smile i love most
demure, candles gamboling in the moonlight
i am a moth lost in the flames
of your demanding timidity
it is then i see in your eyes
the dove gracing your hands
the beast who serves your lust
this is why the Norsemen
fear nothing but women
swords once ready, berserkers, Odin
now lie silent volcanoes in my heart, Freya
the seas are without headstones
and i am wondering again terricolous
all of this are the clouds overhead
it is the heavens i see in your eyes
not the red dawn i fear
we see the jungle, its' song, inevitable war
the struggle to stand in the light

possibly besotted, erratum
the seas have long not cared
with you, i learn, heal
we are undeniably humanity
we are paradise lost
the hells of yesterday
need not rule the heavens of today
your arms gravid with red sunsets
fill my deepest hopes of all morrows  
its' ultimate price is gladly paid

   Miramar   94   The Patient Stones
   Revised   5/22   OKC
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Shakespeare's Sonnet 116 Is Not What It Seems
there are certain words in here common in 19th Century literature that always remind me....besotted with Jane Austen

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Date: 7/29/2022 8:44:00 AM
the main theme of this is a man's transition from Odin to Freya....it is a surrender to the realities that are Love...the song Brandy You're A Fine Girl...she wins, he does not return to the sea...the section on her laughter is my proudest moment here
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Date: 5/22/2022 12:25:00 PM
so interesting thank you for this poem the images were wonderful and the language beautiful.
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Timothy Ray
Date: 6/16/2022 7:15:00 PM
thank you Linda....appreciated
Date: 5/20/2022 10:34:00 PM
Loved your reference to the norsemen and the moth drawn as if in a death dance to the flame.Beautiful.Jesus was often decried and tried as to the company he kept.His reply ,the well are in no need of a physician.Spiritual illness is as real as the most aggressive and malignant of cancers.Often what is professed, good and bad, is a person deluding self or quagmired in shame unable to envision their own self worth.Both equally sad.Loved your thoughts and their expression.
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Timothy Ray
Date: 5/21/2022 11:31:00 AM
thank you, Vickey those quagmired in guilt need to walk away from such....Youtube video, Guilt, Why You Feel It and How to Release It..But I came to realize the ultimate truth – guilt does not allow you to be true to yourself, or authentically true to others either. Guilt also causes many blocks in your healing and keeps other people stuck in pain, suffering and stunted growth as well.
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