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Behind the Wall of Sleep


Modernism abounds
Behind the wall of noise, lies
Tranquillity bay





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Carol Sunshine Brown

August 9, 2010 at 6:50 AM

Congratulations James on your win in ^Rick Parise's contest "Silence Is Golden". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

August 7, 2010 at 9:49 PM

GREAT win, James. Congratulations!

Ralph Taylor

August 6, 2010 at 9:19 AM

Congrats, James. Another great offering. Nice going. Ralph

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 5, 2010 at 4:56 PM

Congrats on this well deserved win, James

Sara Kendrick

August 5, 2010 at 4:19 PM

That bay is idea place to rest and refresh to let the body restore its inner energy..Good write..Sara

Barbara Gorelick

August 5, 2010 at 3:19 PM

We just have to be able to find it..I love this..Congrats on your win. BG

Timothy Brumley

August 5, 2010 at 2:15 PM

But for how long? Congrats on your win James!

Connie Marcum Wong

August 5, 2010 at 12:52 PM

James, congratulations on your win with this lovely haiku. Aloha, Connie

Francine Roberts

August 5, 2010 at 11:47 AM

lovely , congrats on your win

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 5, 2010 at 11:32 AM

Congrats James on your winning poem in Rick's contest with this special Haiku.. luv transquility bay.. serene and sweet.. enjoy another moment of victory my friend..with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

August 4, 2010 at 5:34 PM

OOOh, I like this, James. good luck!

Sharon Tideswell

August 3, 2010 at 5:46 AM

Very nice James. Mmm, that Tranquility Bay sounds very alluring. The more I read this the more I like it...ten words that speak volumes. One for my favs ~ Sharon x