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Behind the Wall of Sleep

Modernism abounds Behind the wall of noise, lies Tranquillity bay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 8/9/2010 6:50:00 AM
Congratulations James on your win in ^Rick Parise's contest "Silence Is Golden". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:49:00 PM
GREAT win, James. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/6/2010 9:19:00 AM
Congrats, James. Another great offering. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 8/5/2010 4:56:00 PM
Congrats on this well deserved win, James
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Date: 8/5/2010 4:19:00 PM
That bay is idea place to rest and refresh to let the body restore its inner energy..Good write..Sara
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Date: 8/5/2010 3:19:00 PM
We just have to be able to find it..I love this..Congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 8/5/2010 2:15:00 PM
But for how long? Congrats on your win James!
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Date: 8/5/2010 12:52:00 PM
James, congratulations on your win with this lovely haiku. Aloha, Connie
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Date: 8/5/2010 11:47:00 AM
lovely , congrats on your win
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Date: 8/5/2010 11:32:00 AM
Congrats James on your winning poem in Rick's contest with this special Haiku.. luv transquility bay.. serene and sweet.. enjoy another moment of victory my friend..with luv..
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Date: 8/4/2010 5:34:00 PM
OOOh, I like this, James. good luck!
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Date: 8/3/2010 5:46:00 AM
Very nice James. Mmm, that Tranquility Bay sounds very alluring. The more I read this the more I like it...ten words that speak volumes. One for my favs ~ Sharon x
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Date: 8/3/2010 5:24:00 AM
I love this James... I need to take a break on that bay.. ~ Wilma
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