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Behind the Sky

Behind the sky lie fears we deny Behind the sky lurks the eyes that pry Behind the sky lives new worlds to try Behind the sky lights man's mythic lie Behind the sky causes hopes to fly Behind the sky feel what makes me cry Behind the sky opens as I die Behind the sky hides an answer why

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/4/2022 11:46:00 AM

What lies "behind" is the eternal, unanswered mystery to ponder until we enter the "beyond." Such a depth of philosophical wondering in your simple lines. You always bring me into that place "behind" the first meaning of your lines. Congratulations on your win! Enjoyed this wandering in your questions Greg! Blessings.

Greg Gaul
Date: 5/5/2022 3:42:00 PM

Sam, your philisophical mind is always asking the next question or the question behind the question. They say curiosity is the attribute of great artists. This is what propels your poetry. Thanks so much for turning your interest to my humble work. Your visits are special and most coveted.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/1/2022 7:09:00 AM

"Behind The Sky" - Wow! So many things! Congratulations!

Greg Gaul
Date: 5/3/2022 5:16:00 PM

Thank you for looking deeper into my verse. Much appreciated.

Anna Marie Kaianah

Date: 5/1/2022 12:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Greg! <3 ~Anna Kaianah

Greg Gaul
Date: 5/3/2022 5:20:00 PM

Excellent hosting Anna. Happy to place in your contest. Thank you.

Mark Anthony Bartolo

Date: 12/2/2020 10:22:00 AM

Clever poem :) Very insightful and inspiring.

Greg Gaul
Date: 12/2/2020 12:21:00 PM

Surprising comment, I am most appreciative. Thank you.

P.M. Richter

Date: 10/2/2020 6:04:00 PM

That is a great piece of poetry my friend.

Greg Gaul
Date: 10/3/2020 4:33:00 AM

Wow! What a surprise comment. Thanks so much, greatly appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/2/2020 11:21:00 AM

- Congratulations on your 4th place in the contest, Greg :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Greg Gaul
Date: 10/2/2020 12:58:00 PM

Your kind comments are always appreciated and welcome.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/2/2020 11:12:00 AM

Your style is unique, Greg. I guess your "mystery" is what lies behind the sky. Very interesting. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn

Greg Gaul
Date: 10/2/2020 12:57:00 PM

Carolyn, thanks for taking a chance on my different momorhyme. Always appreciate your notice.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2020 3:20:00 PM

yes, just really what is behind the sky?? I think there are other dimenstions not even seen by science's telescopes!

Greg Gaul
Date: 8/30/2020 4:57:00 PM

Andrea, that is a creative approach. For now though, only you can decide what is behind the sky. That will be your reality. Thanks for your remarks and visit.