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Behind the Shade

White shade’s drawn, we know Dad is tinkering. Wheelie on tip toes, his kids’ curious. Surprises are in store, coming our way. My brother and I see shadows blinkering. Wondering! Our excitement furious — F U N day. Eleven months apart, our surprise gifts Dad wheels out Irish twin bikes for birthdays. His leopard. Basket on mine. H A P P Y us! Nevermind trainer wheels, our progress’ swift. H U R R A Y! 11/2/2020 The Speaker Poetry Contest Sponsor: Sara Kendrick *Irish Twins meaning - we were born within twelve months of one another

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Date: 11/22/2020 5:49:00 PM
what a marvelously happy one this is. Congrats for the win here, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/22/2020 6:06:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 11/21/2020 5:28:00 PM
Congratulate, Kim, on your great placement in the contest for your beautifully written Curtal Sonnet!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/21/2020 6:39:00 PM
Thank you, Newton!
Date: 11/21/2020 2:17:00 AM
Thanks for participating in my contest. I appreciate you taking the time and writing this nice event from your life. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/21/2020 6:39:00 PM
Thank you, Sara! Muah <3
Date: 11/3/2020 4:26:00 AM
This reminds me of the day my twin and I received our new bikes. We were thrilled!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2020 4:58:00 AM
One of the best gifts ever!
Date: 11/2/2020 7:58:00 AM
Perfect Kim. What fun - I enjoyed the surprise! Linda
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/2/2020 6:01:00 PM
Thank you, Linda!

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