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Behind the Face You Wear

The last train for the night, 
Is about to leave for home,
You ask yourself “Be safe and go”, 
Or “Stay in the dark alone”,

So you walk these alleys, these alien streets, 
The bleak, the black, the cold, 
And realise your life is here to hunt, 
Down every winding road,

Away from “safe” existing in walls, 
Away from the nine to five,
Your life is the ramshackle shed in a field, 
Painting love to keep alive,

Your life is meant to be a flash of light, 
A beautifully hypnotic noise,
To enjoy, to fight, to fulfil, to dare, 
Your life is all your choice.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Doll Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 8:20 AM
Wonderful poem; especially the last stanza, Well done,Lewis.
Pandit Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 7:52 AM
Awesome message, as is the case in many of your poems..impressive last stanza.
One Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 5:03 AM
So many hide, but so little can see that.. great poem and great painting Lewis..
Faulkner Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 10:49 PM
'your life is here to hunt/down every winding road' - so profound, I enjoyed this!
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