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Behind enemy lines, we walk Fears and desires spiral Ego stalks but we do not balk As love throbs go viral Bliss fulfils our heart’s thirst Fear fraught thought bubbles burst Divine dance unrehearsed Hark! Love for love so pines Behind enemy lines 10-October-2021 Quietus

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Date: 10/9/2021 10:13:00 PM
Any poem on love is a success.
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Date: 10/9/2021 10:39:00 PM
True Victor! Love is the underlying reality, the true God substance, separated by fears & desires we choose to nurture

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