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Behind Closed Eyes

Thoughts flow softly, in a melodic wave Eyes closed, shaded clouds move through your mind Rolling gently, reminiscent of waves at the beach The feeling of peace runs through your body The blank canvas slowly coming to life Painting soft swirls of blues and greens Giving your dreamscape life and movement Creating what you wish from what you see

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Date: 3/3/2022 1:38:00 PM
Another favourite for me, dreamy, calming, an excellent piece of writing .
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Date: 1/19/2020 4:38:00 AM
behind the closed the third one is awaken
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Date: 6/15/2019 10:07:00 AM
You made it easy to dream...Well done...
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Date: 6/13/2019 5:04:00 PM
Well said, but a vanishing experience as people turn to their smartphone for entertainment. Aloha! Rico
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