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Beginning the Day With a Shovel and Broom

Beginning the day with a shovel and broom Construction clean-up around five this morning Overnight precipitation causes fog to loom Darker clouds are quickly forming Construction clean-up around five this morning The beginning of a twelve hour day Darker clouds are quickly forming The skies gone from blue to dark grey The beginning of a twelve hour day Enough trash to span for miles The skies gone from blue to dark gray There's enough work to last a while Enough trash to span for miles Overnight precipitation causes fog to loom There's enough work to last a while Beginning the day with a shovel and broom

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Date: 10/14/2009 12:10:00 PM
sounds rough, I have been there...nicely written.
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Date: 8/18/2009 11:40:00 AM
Very nice, Jared. They're fun to write aren't they... DAS-J
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Date: 8/4/2009 12:26:00 PM
Yes, Jared I see that you have written in the Pantoum form. It is nicely written. I can see you cleaning very descriptive. Sara
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Date: 7/17/2009 1:11:00 PM
Long day Jared, wonderfully described write>>James
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