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these three lines so terse are they a 'beginning verse'* to something much worse *translation of haiku

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Date: 12/6/2012 7:14:00 PM
Brian, love this haiku...pd
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Date: 12/6/2012 7:12:00 PM
good one...pd
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Date: 12/28/2011 4:36:00 PM
Hey, you did a cool poem with the theme of new beginnings. Or is it not for that contest of that name? Thanks for my recent win in your contest, Brian. I will enjoy reading the other winners.
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Date: 12/26/2011 10:10:00 AM
Both!or what do you think?good dose!i like
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