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Begging God Please

have u ever been broken . forced to fall to your knees begging god to take u from this place .. wanting nothing more that this life has to give.. it has allready taken too much .. your youth .. your faith .. your dreams . ... and now your love .... all thats left is your life.. too emotionally messed up u look to the dark night sky .. hoping and praying god is hearing your broken out cries you wipe the tears from your eyes.. but its usless they keep comming and its no big suprise.. your mind is unstable.. and ur physically shaken .. how could any one ever have so much aching . A broken soul & spirt & heart is only the beging of what your thinking .. u come to a compleate stop as the time just freezes ur mortal thoughts stuck between here and there all that u care about is just getting out pareall hell not remembering the last time ur soul was at ease .. u just stay on your knees .. and just pour out ur mind and soul to god begging him please please .. just take u from this world... to just be at ease ... when ur broken everything is everything!

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Date: 5/6/2016 12:34:00 AM
SAMANTHA COLLINS MCDORMAN, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. ** SKAT
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Date: 4/24/2016 9:59:00 AM
SAMANTHA COLLINS , nicely penned. Glad to read your poem today. Luv *LINDA*
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