Before We Take a Beatdown

The streets have got me, gave up the monotony
     Please don’t try and stop me, cause it’s you and not me
And now I’m buyin’, you won’t see me cryin’
     Now I’m really flyin’, party’s now a fryin’

The sons are singin’, now my ears are ringin’
      Company’s a stringin’, grillin’ and a blingin’
We all a cribbin’, nothin’ but ad libbin’
      Eatin’ candy ribbon, tippin’ for the trippin’

But then I saw her, working on the corner
      Gotta try and warn her before I have to mourn her
Cause she’s my sister, lookin’ for a mister
     Gonna pop a blister, really gonna twist her

Here come the five-o, now she gonna dive, oh
     Into the drive, yo, better she’s alive though
What is the reason, we sufferin’ this season
     The air is just a teasin’, a thirst that just ain’t easin’

I’m gonna save her, call in every favor
     Give up on this flava’, ain’t gettin’ any braver
We goin’ home now before we take a beat down
     Gotta put our feet down, headin’ for the sweet ground

     
 3/14/18
Contest: Rapid Rhyme
Sponsor: Brenda Chiri
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 3/26/2018 8:10:00 AM
Mike, this is SO good. I love the story in your poem. CONGRATS on your HM! Janice
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/26/2018 9:18:00 AM
Thank so much, Janice xxoo Happy Monday!
Date: 3/25/2018 10:53:00 PM
Well done, Mike. Congrats on your winning poem.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/26/2018 7:30:00 AM
Thanks very much, Line xxoo
Date: 3/25/2018 10:29:00 PM
Mike, congratulations on your win in the contest with this sweet rhyming poem… Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/26/2018 7:30:00 AM
Thanks so much, Eve xxoo
Date: 3/15/2018 7:47:00 AM
sounded like a rap mike, love the rhymes and the flow to this one... Bit of Tupac in you..
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/15/2018 8:02:00 AM
I'm glad you thought it sounded like a rap, I totally don't know what I'm doing but really wanted to try Happy Thursday!!!
Date: 3/14/2018 12:51:00 PM
- So skilled, Mike ... a pleasure to read ... :) - Lovely rhythm and flow - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/14/2018 1:12:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise Happy Wednesday!!
Date: 3/14/2018 11:55:00 AM
Definitely rapid rhyme..enjoyed reading your poem, Mike..best for a win.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/14/2018 12:32:00 PM
Thanks Vijay, it's good to try something new, got to keep growing and hopefully learning !!! Happy Wednesday!
Date: 3/14/2018 10:02:00 AM
Wow, that'll take some beating Mike. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 3/14/2018 10:18:00 AM
thanks Tom !!
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