Bernard Chan Poet Quintain (English)

Before the World Wakes

Willows bend over a celadon lake, 
                              Like village women in dawn’s stealthy light, 
                                Rinsing their hair ere the daffodils wake, 
                             And birds crochet the air with chorus bright, 
                             ‘Neath a lone cloud turning gossamer white.

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David Smith January 14, 2018 at 1:02 AM Glad I stopped by. Simple yet very effective piece Bernard. I like your style and the fact you are not trying to copy anyone. Poem perfect length. No wasted words. You stuck to subject. Well done. Will read more of your work. Best regards David in NZ Bernard Chan January 14, 2018 at 4:13 AM Hi David, thank you very much for dropping by and for your kind words. Much appreciated.

Susan Ashley January 6, 2018 at 9:41 PM Oh Bernard, just stunning. Absolutely breathtaking throughout, but especially your first three lines, which are exquisite. The beautiful moments of dawn are adorned lushly with your gorgeous content and imagery. Star dusted poetry! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan Bernard Chan January 7, 2018 at 7:53 AM Susan, thank you for being always so encouraging and supportive. You're an angel :)

Arturo Michael January 6, 2018 at 3:05 AM What a beautiful description, using a village woman to visualize the willow...Nice one...Blessings to you Bernard Bernard Chan January 6, 2018 at 6:34 AM Thanks a lot. Much appreciated. And same to you, Arturo.