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Before the Tempest

whirling wind whistling waves of anger cooking wrath in the mouth of a cyclone i kiss her on the nose eyes cheeks lips mouth pale fingers toes knees elbows knuckles every where before the tempest in a frenzy... her anger jealousy stubburness i kiss her patience kindness openness every where before the tempest in a trans.... her voice climbs on my hardened skin migrating to the ossicles spreading in the neurons of my longing temporal lobes notes chords and tunes of endless divine music trees are white and the dews green we are shivering under the red blanket

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Date: 5/13/2016 7:41:00 PM
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Date: 12/19/2015 11:32:00 PM
Francis, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. I'm also sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do. ~SKAT LOVE~"
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Francis Osho
Date: 12/20/2015 12:11:00 AM
THANKS SKAT. MERRY XMAS
Date: 12/7/2015 7:40:00 PM
WOW, Francis, you are new here, and all over. I love that. I've seen you on my poems. I promise I will come back and read more of your poems. For right now, this is my late WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Francis Osho
Date: 12/7/2015 8:18:00 PM
thanks linda. lindoo
Date: 12/5/2015 11:30:00 PM
All sensation ... Great poem, Francis !
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Francis Osho
Date: 12/6/2015 1:12:00 AM
thanks rocco
Date: 12/1/2015 3:51:00 PM
Hi Francis, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/4/2015 9:16:00 AM
A "7" is the highest score we can rate a poem on PoetrySoup.
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Francis Osho
Date: 12/1/2015 5:38:00 PM
thanks pandita,what is a score of 7?
Date: 12/1/2015 10:57:00 AM
Francis, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Francis Osho
Date: 12/2/2015 5:33:00 AM
hi skat. i read some of your poems and they are awesome.well, i am a physician. but dwell in poems dabble in colors sing and all sorts of unnecessary stuff... well if you wish you can send me a friend request in fb have a great day
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Francis Osho
Date: 12/1/2015 5:39:00 PM
thanks skat
Date: 12/1/2015 6:21:00 AM
My apologies...forgot the seven (as per usual). Done - its a seven now! :) j
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Francis Osho
Date: 12/1/2015 7:37:00 AM
thanks john
Date: 12/1/2015 6:19:00 AM
I enjoyed the read, Francis. The poem seems to speak of your own experience when faced by the fury of the raging "Tempest". Having never faced one myself I doubt if I could have been so eloquent as yourself when penning it so. Very nicely done indeed - A worthy seven! Welcome to the soup, my old shoe! My very best regards! :) john
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Francis Osho
Date: 12/1/2015 7:39:00 AM
i never faced a real tempest. of course the tempest of the woman,hahaa.thanks

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