Before the Sun Goes Down

A day of angry words and pain ends as it began with
Not a thought for what lay in between
The fading light of memory burns away in heavens flames
As the sun races 'yond to dream unseen

I turn a cheek full of regret and slowly make my way
Down a path where little comfort e’er I’ll find
To tarry long there on would find me sleeping all alone
To hurry on may leave my pride behind

In silence, I surrender to this battle deep inside
Though struggles lost and won come back around
Peace.  Is it found, or made…or something in between?
It must be mine before the sun goes down


Christopher Thor Britt
Motif: Philosophical
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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O.J. Hunt Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 10:40 PM
Very nice, congrats Christopher!
Kendrick Avatar
March 16, 2014 at 7:31 AM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Sara
Deschler Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 5:37 PM
Atonement and forgiveness are wonderful things, if only the people we hurt would allow us the closure. I liked the way you expressed this in a poetic and beautiful way. Very nicely done, Christopher. Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you very much for the kind congrats on my poem. :)
Richards Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 6:32 PM
It is a struggle to forget angry words, thoughts or deeds, but it is a struggle we all share..... I love the thought behind this poem!
Goswami Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 3:41 PM
Nice written Dear ...Best wishes from India...
Mehta Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 5:53 AM
Very Wonderful write. Congrats on the win, CTB
A  Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 1:18 AM
Congratulations, Christopher awesome win. ~ Love ~ SKAT
Horsch Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 7:20 PM
Congrats on the win Chris, It was well deserved. A great poem.......Roger
Britt Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 12:23 AM
Thank your Roger. I appreciate your encouragement more than you know. CTB
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 4:32 PM
- Congratulations on your win, Christopher !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 6:35 AM
- A settlement with yourself .... pride put aside, bare your soul - Peace of mind and spirit: "Is it found, or made ... or something in between?" - A skilled poems and messages, Christopher !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Britt Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 12:24 AM
Thank you very much, Anne Lise. It is an occasional issue with every married man. LOL. CTB
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