Angel C Poet I do not know?

Before the Party

Her mind is like an upbeat child who sees delicious cakes;
Her mind is like a lukewarm breeze that passes with no breaks
Her mind is like a whoosh of chaos rising from the sea;
Her mind is shouting over everything, because she’s a bride to be.
 
Bring her a bowl of cream with fruit piled on the side;
Make her laugh and let her ponder the thought of who’s waiting inside;
Then oh so swiftly tuck her slim frame into the cloth that you weaved;
Because she’s about to enter the party, where she's a bride to be.

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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper August 5, 2013 at 1:38 PM Party poem, you have to like a party poem!!! Very nice Angel -Very nice! MC Angel C August 6, 2013 at 8:37 AM Lol I only wrote it as a school assignment. Thank you though.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 13, 2013 at 1:29 PM .... and the party was successful ..... - the couple answered: I do ! A nice poem to read Angel! - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Angel C April 15, 2013 at 12:34 PM I only wrote this one for a school assignment, I'm not good at these types of poems. Lol, thank you and I like how you finished it. [:

Fred Bell April 9, 2013 at 6:46 AM good writing may you keep them coming Angel C April 9, 2013 at 4:27 PM Thank you Fred

Debra Mundine April 2, 2013 at 11:27 PM Interesting poem. Angel C August 6, 2013 at 8:38 AM Thank you.

Pace Ink-U-Script April 2, 2013 at 6:39 PM Oooh...this is beautifully written!! Angel C August 6, 2013 at 8:38 AM Thank you.