Before the Gates of Alahsar - Original Version - 2

2.

Off into the distance, total darkness,
to the right where all was light
Divinity thy beast is coming
from his land of endless night.
The thunder and the lightning playing
terrors own sweet symphony.
Darkness, which is soul destroying,
brings the man of dark to thee.

And then the beasts do scream in anger,
for the vengeance of the light is near,
summoned by an angel cry,
many of the night shall sing death's song.
As God's anger strikes the earth,
upon lightning bolt Unicorn falls,
black as night, horn ivory,
upon its back, a figure of black.

The Arlaghs, they who never fear,
kin to wolf, they never run,
head of wolf, body of man,
legs of wolf to speed them on.
Always toward enemy, ne'er retreat,
kill all mortals, eat of meat.
Red the day when Arlagh strikes,
blood, their nutriential drink.

Fear spread through the mortals that fled,
they saw the signs, all was lost.
A master of the darkest night,
now come to earth but what the cost?
Would womanhood pine away,
at the closing of the day?
Would man be done, ne'er to return?
Would their flame finally blow out?

Riding forth across Badicha's plain,
unicorn and man of night.
Straight as the errant flame,
they both do come into the light.
Sword, Utamol in his right hand,
held aloft to the child of light,
in salute to beauty's all,
in salute to woman's power.

They do turn to face a foe,
the Arlaghs they begin to come,
ground will shake where e'er they go
they do come upon the run.
Come then forth to meet thy fate,
Hounds of Hell, no hesitation,
for Utamol does softly call,
the sword of blood will have you all.

"Stand alone and you shall die."
an Angel cries from way up high.
"I stand here, let any come,"
The dark man said, before the gates.
No man came, he stood alone,
Arlaghs forming as they ran.
The charge was coming, the blood red noon,
A Dark Man did await his fate.

With slavering and gnashing teeth they came,
the Arlaghs on their deathly charge.
Both Unicorn and man of night,
Moved not from where they stood.
Silent as statues standing there
both ready for the blood-letting to come.
Man and Unicorn, single heart, single brain,
standing under a now darkening sun

To Be Continued..........
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 3/6/2019 1:36:00 PM
A compelling read that excites with the darkness of the battle to come. You are a wonderful writer my friend! I look forward to reading more! : ) xxoo
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 3/11/2019 11:08:00 AM
Hi Connie, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you like the piece. I am so glad I decided to post this original version. The Alghars are a fearsome race to face in battle. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 3/3/2019 8:32:00 AM
- A man of strength and courage ... a wonderful series ... a story that is unique and exciting :) - Have a lovely Sunday, my friend Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/3/2019 9:10:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you like the piece. The Dark man, the son of the storm leads men and women of courage into battle against the of the Dark Ones. I do enjoy writing this poem. I am glad I posted this first version of my epic. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 3/2/2019 11:12:00 AM
A battle ahead...those creatures give me the dread...Well done...
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 3/2/2019 6:37:00 PM
Hi Arturo, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Yes my friend, a battle is ahead. The Arlaghs very frightening within dream, they can fill me with dread. Their one mission in life, to feed. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.
Date: 3/2/2019 10:49:00 AM
Great reading Vladislav, are these the ones that you posted before?
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 3/2/2019 11:02:00 AM
Hi Silent, these are not the epic versions I have started writing. This was the short version I wrote, just to see if I could keep a story form going and follow the dream. From this version the epic versions arose. If this version had failed Alahsar would not have been. I am glad you liked the piece. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.
Date: 3/2/2019 10:37:00 AM
I would like to thank all those who drop by to view this piece. Your visits help a poet to keep singing. Hugs....Mike. XX
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