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Before the Eclipse

Many people took long trips While others are ignoring The much-awaited big eclipse; With expectations soaring, The ones with special glasses Are hyped up for the event, But clouds may interfere and cause A dose of discontent. Totality, I’ve heard, is something Special to observe, Though where I live, that platter Isn’t what the skies will serve. Still, I’ll head to the river, Can’t resist the story’s hook, My cardboard glasses on, although I’ll be too scared to look.

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Date: 4/11/2024 1:35:00 PM
It was just a "partial" one here. I observed what there was to see...however briefly...from my living room window. I don't expect I'll be around 20 years from now for the next one. Ah, well...
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Date: 4/9/2024 12:47:00 PM
Every piece of creation, down to the lowly weed, is as astounding as the eclipse
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Date: 4/9/2024 10:55:00 AM
Hello Ilene, I would be scared to look. It was not dark enough for anyone to see the eclipse. In some parts of Canada the people had a better view. Hugs. Darlene/
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Date: 4/8/2024 5:21:00 PM
Great poetry! Love your take on the day!
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Date: 4/8/2024 2:56:00 PM
there is always frustration, while looking an eclipse, sometimes better do'nt look at nicely written poet
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Date: 4/8/2024 11:00:00 AM
- Where and when to watch ... in the dark we see nothing ... at least not with cardboard glasses on ... do as Jan ... watch it on TV, Ilene :) - hugs
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Date: 4/8/2024 10:50:00 AM
I do hope you get to see it Ilene, we have cloudy skies here and there was only a limited chance we would see a little of the eclipse so I will watch on tv which is much safer! hugs jan xx
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