Before the Echo of Raindrops

The night sky reveals in a split second of light. My mind often wonders at its scintilla sight. Like a paparazzi camera in the dark bushes and a floating papyrus-basket amidst bulrushes. I’m drawn to the laser show of lightning. Oh how it entertains, sinister and frightening! Vertical to tall trees and slow-highway-motion. The stranger never goes unnoticed with its commotion. The eclectic zigzag, like a serrated knife carving the melon of the sky with strife. Dark pregnant clouds partner with danger — a calm cradle’s serenity rearranger. Bring it on, with all the players on the stage, procuring pale and ghostly figures with all their rage. 2/17/2018 Describe a thunderstorm without the sense of sound/Brenda Chiri
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 10:00 PM
Nicely done, Kim. Delightful poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 3:29 AM
Thanks, Line!
Pandit Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 6:47 PM
Such wonderful imagery in your poem Kim. Excellent rhyme and flow..a winning entry.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 7:05 PM
Thank you, Vijay!
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