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Before the Day Turns to Night ITQ

The day starts with a happy glow. Wonderful flowers start to grow. In the sun children, on the go, Just running about to and fro. There is lots more to do today. The children want more time to play. Bees still pollinate on their way. The artist needs the sun to stay. Mother nature tells night to wait. Must hesitate, procrastinate. Night says darkness cannot abate. Night’s record is not being late. Solution says moon, to their plight. Tonight, I will shine extra bright.
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Fowler Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 12:19 PM
I love the compromise here at the end Wen my friend. So sweet and such a cute photo! Congratulations! :)
Volumes Avatar
April 4, 2024 at 7:54 PM
Thanks sweet Laf. Glad you liked it.
Messina Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 11:45 AM
A wonderful write, SV. You did well with this form. Congratulations on your top win. PS: Thank you also for reminding me to judge I was out of the loop not feeling well. Still not myself but feeling a little better. hugs Charlie
Volumes Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 3:30 AM
Thanks Charlie, so sorry to hear that you've been ill. Hoping you are completely recovered very soon. Take care. Best wishes from Wen.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 11:17 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful write/nice picture. We just had a pretty full moon. I love the sky day or night... Have a blessed day...........
Volumes Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 3:29 AM
Thanks so much Lovely Paula . I really enjoyed yours too.
Narain Avatar
January 13, 2024 at 10:18 AM
Nice poem in new format,
Volumes Avatar
January 13, 2024 at 3:58 PM
There it is again Jay, If I cant be better, at least I can be different. Thanks for your comment my friend.
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