Charles Messina Poet Rhyme

Before The Day Turned Into Night

Before the day turned into night 
I slept until the morning's light 
My dreams I dreamt I now shall write 
And pray to God, I get it right 

The dream I dreamt was long and sweet 
A dream I wish I could repeat 
Now wouldn't that be, well, "Oh- so neat" 
Just a poet's wish, just a poet's treat
 
I dreamt a dream to reminisce  
I dreamt your lives be full with bliss 
I dreamt that all that doth read this 
Be fill your hearts with happiness 

Before the dream I dreamt last night 
I prayed to God- you'll wake to light

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Andrea Dietrich January 14, 2024 at 2:20 PM thanks for the model poem, Charles. this is such a thoughtful poem.

Joseph May January 8, 2024 at 5:04 AM Beautiful sentiment Charles, thanks for your congrats.

Victor Buhagiar January 8, 2024 at 2:15 AM May your dreams be always joyous.

Eve Roper January 7, 2024 at 1:42 PM Bless you my friend as well.

Brian Sambourne January 7, 2024 at 11:15 AM Your ability to rhyme and convey true feeling simultaneously is poetic precision indeed. A fine posting, Charles, with a grand wish for all to conclude. All the best, Brian

Linda Alice Fowler January 7, 2024 at 9:40 AM You touch my heart Charlie...such a sweet, euphoric write. Thank you and may your have light in your life as well. :)

Lin Lane January 7, 2024 at 7:38 AM Charlie, the day has not yet turned to night... even though it's the next day. ;-) Thank you for adding a kind personal touch to this poem for all of us.

Beryl Edmonds January 7, 2024 at 1:35 AM Charles, that’s a beautiful dream you had last night. Just so you know I woke to the light… Belle

Karen Croft January 7, 2024 at 12:06 AM Beautiful poem

Gershon Wolf January 6, 2024 at 8:08 PM How sweet, CM!! And I DID wake to light, by golly... Had insomnia til 6 a.m. and slept til 8:30 am... lol. Don't wish it on anyone. Keep smiling, gw

Mrs. Yolanda Nicholsen January 6, 2024 at 4:06 PM This is a very lovely write enjoyed reading your work many blessings.

Darlene De Beaulieu January 6, 2024 at 11:25 AM Hello Charles Messina, Such an unusual dream. Thank you for telling us about your dream. My fav. Happy New Year. Enjopy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Tom Cunningham January 6, 2024 at 9:38 AM Love the message in your verse Charlie. Hope your new year is off to a flying start. Tom

Ink Empress January 6, 2024 at 9:38 AM I wish and pray that your life too will be full of bliss dear charlie, you are a very caring kind person with so much light to offer through poetry and beyond for all around . And that truly emanates in such eloquence with captivating rhymes through your exquisite word weaving. Pleasure reading your work always and i hope this prayer reaches many and would come true. Sending you light

Craig Cornish January 6, 2024 at 9:27 AM Bachatcha Charlie - this is actually written in iambic tetrameter and is an excellent example of a quatorzain.

Hiya Sharma January 6, 2024 at 8:46 AM Woww.. This is such a creative and soulfully divine poem that conveys wishes of goodness towards the readers as the aura here is so beautifully enchanting.. Your wordplay is profound and really captivates the attention.. Gorgeously rhymed as well with wonderful flow.. Absolutely enjoyed reading this, dear Charlie, sending best wishes and light ~ :)

Deb M January 6, 2024 at 7:24 AM Oh Charlie….this is so very enchanting and kind! Lovely! Debx

Sotto Poet January 6, 2024 at 6:54 AM Charlie, your poetic prowess shines brilliantly in this masterpiece, adorned with captivating imagery, seamless flow, and boundless imagination. Your profound words evoke a myriad of emotions through your skillful brushstrokes. I truly relished your composition, particularly enraptured by the ethereal allure brought forth by the juxtaposition of dreaming and the delicate transition from night to day.

Martin Braun January 6, 2024 at 6:54 AM That is a wonderful prayer "I prayed to God- you'll wake to light," and a wonderful poem. Thank you.

Vijay Pandit January 6, 2024 at 6:35 AM I dreamt a dream to reminisce I dreamt your lives be full with bliss I dreamt that all that doth read this Be fill your hearts with happiness --such awesome thoughts, Charlie. What a wonderful dream!

Silent One January 6, 2024 at 6:26 AM What a beautifully crafted poem! The rhythmic flow and rhyme scheme lend a gentle cadence to the verses. The imagery of dreaming and the transition from night to day adds a touch of ethereal beauty to the narrative... Love it.