Before Sunrise

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In the stillness of morning
I can truly cherish
each sacred moment
as I am all too well aware
that it won’t last much longer
the phone will ring
everyone will soon rise
the musts and wants awaken
tugging for attention at my skirt
come midday I’ll crave
Just one tiny second to myself
A place where I can sneak away
But right this minute
Let me bask in this instant of perfection
While it’s in my hand
And hold this breath of silence
That sways in the morning air as
The sun rises in all its glorious splendor



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on March 10, 2020 for contest STRAND CHOICE C sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 3RD

Originally posted on October 30, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 11/14/2018 3:59:00 PM
You captured that moment perfectly, Line!! Nicely-penned. Regards, John.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/14/2018 5:53:00 PM
Thank you so much, John, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 10/31/2018 1:41:00 PM
You've captured the moment and the feeling so well. Bravo! :) Gershon
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/31/2018 1:42:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon. Most appreciated.
Date: 10/30/2018 5:02:00 PM
Gloriously rendered... I love the quiet times like this! ;)
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/31/2018 8:36:00 AM
Thanks! You too, my friend! ;)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/30/2018 5:43:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Rhona. I wish you many such perfect moments.
Date: 10/30/2018 2:00:00 PM
Best time of the day for sure, especially in summertime. Before I retired that was when I used to get up, felt like the world was mine for an hour. Lovely verse Line. Tom.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/30/2018 4:25:00 PM
Absolutely, what an awesome feeling, Tom.
Date: 10/30/2018 1:58:00 PM
You are off and running... glad you have a perfect morning to appreciate before that happens. This is lovely, Line
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/30/2018 4:25:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sandra.
Date: 10/30/2018 12:11:00 PM
Early mornings when everyone else is asleep is the most peaceful time of day. Your poems expresses that beautifully.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/30/2018 4:26:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Chris.
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