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Before Sunrise

In the stillness of morning
I can truly cherish
Each sacred moment
As I am all too well aware
That it won’t last much longer

The phone will ring
Everyone will soon rise
The musts and wants awaken
Tugging for attention at my skirt

Come midday I’ll crave
Just one tiny second to myself
A place where I can sneak away

But right this minute
Let me bask in this instant of perfection
While it’s in my hand

And hold this breath of silence
That sways in the morning air as
The sun rises in all its glorious splendor



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on March 10, 2020 for contest STRAND CHOICE C sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 3RD
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Michaels Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 3:59 PM
You captured that moment perfectly, Line!! Nicely-penned. Regards, John.
Gauthier Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 5:53 PM
Thank you so much, John, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Wolf Avatar
October 31, 2018 at 1:41 PM
You've captured the moment and the feeling so well. Bravo! :) Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
October 31, 2018 at 1:42 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon. Most appreciated.
Mcferran Avatar
October 30, 2018 at 5:02 PM
Gloriously rendered... I love the quiet times like this! ;)
Mcferran Avatar
October 31, 2018 at 8:36 AM
Thanks! You too, my friend! ;)
Gauthier Avatar
October 30, 2018 at 5:43 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Rhona. I wish you many such perfect moments.
Cunningham Avatar
October 30, 2018 at 2:00 PM
Best time of the day for sure, especially in summertime. Before I retired that was when I used to get up, felt like the world was mine for an hour. Lovely verse Line. Tom.
Gauthier Avatar
October 30, 2018 at 4:25 PM
Absolutely, what an awesome feeling, Tom.
Green Avatar
October 30, 2018 at 12:11 PM
Early mornings when everyone else is asleep is the most peaceful time of day. Your poems expresses that beautifully.
Gauthier Avatar
October 30, 2018 at 4:26 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Chris.
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