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Written on March 5, 2025

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flashed autumn’s trees, the limbs gray leaves crunching quietly, like a feeling being crushed, crumpled lost dreams who compel me to see the grief the nostalgia – graceful as a still light falling, aching, engraving hope into the heart, hesitating so I know the music of a thought who hears joy flowing on the echoes grieving for the past, where love could last but never, on the overcast skies where mercy trembles and shudders like the tingling, frost in graceful mazes, despair erasing the melancholic where rivers stir the stones break into the thoughts with roaring waters in voices overturned musical stories, poetry thundering on the crisp, cool silence reverberating in stanzas of light softly playing on the Southern night a star, a wind, a stillness alive with the ache of autumn stirring up the soundless melodies of light drifting in and out of the twilight fireflies in colors of time, flowing on the heavy mist awakening a thought dreaming like the moon who sees beyond the darkness beyond the seas into the wisdom, where my heart grieves unseeing, only seeing the soundless prayers alive in the maze of a spirit who knows He is near, never far, like the stars always alive and listening so alive where I can hear in my heart I know He lives in the autumn I can hear His will on the dusk, I can sense His still where I believe His love will fulfill – I love God and believe He is the answer to every doubt He is the reason I’ll always see the forest, despite the trees.

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Date: 3/7/2025 12:40:00 AM
Beautiful, Gina, congratulations:)
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