Before I Was Hidden In It

The world is so big and noisy and busy,
I have become but hidden in it.
Remembering the honeysuckle,
When life was so sweet and delicious.
When plump little hands of innocence,
Squeezed a string ending in a drop of honey
Into pink lips of a chortling face
To inspire the cuddle of dewy wild flowers
To say “I wuv you, Mother.”
Then as she smiled, I could smell
A scratch-baked yellow cake.
She read to me at nap time.

Before a world so big and noisy and busy,
Before I was hidden in it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Labyrinth Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 9:28 AM
very beautiful, very sad. it is the quiet moments we remember. x
Proxenos Avatar
June 16, 2019 at 1:20 PM
This is a humble beautiful write Sunlite, you are not lost - your poem sounds as if you just found yourself! Years to go by, and we feel we are hidden, but not you however busy and noisy - your poem is wondrous! Hugs, Jennifer.
Wanter Avatar
June 16, 2019 at 5:16 PM
What kind words! Thank you!
Allison Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 1:14 PM
aww i have a huge lump in my throat reading your touching poem Sunlite - you will never be hidden from view with poems like this!:-) hugs jan xx
Wanter Avatar
June 16, 2019 at 5:18 PM
Thank you, Jan.
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