Before I Ruin the View

Before I ruin the view, I see…I see
as a child - the colors meld
in the sky, in the lake, at tree level.

Before I ruin the view, I chew on it,
revel in it, see God in it. I see…

Before I ruin the view, alone with myself,
alone with sights and sounds; infinity.

Before I ruin the view, by adding people,
I grip each petal, each blade, each
coniferous and fanned leaf, each bird,
each squirrel, each…each….

Before I ruin the view…before we ruined
Eden by setting our sights on low-
hanging fruit, perhaps red and delicious,
sweet, juicy like gossip and AI…don’t look -

it’s a sham. there’s a snake under the rock.
Before you and I, ruin anything, everything,
let us be awestruck, illuminated, engulfed

in the allowance of so many good things.
Not everyone sees. Some fish for pictorials.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Greenhough Avatar
July 8, 2025 at 6:21 AM
A great outlook on the obsession with photography. A beautiful poem. Enjoy nature.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 8, 2025 at 8:05 AM
Sometimes words don’t come. Sometimes it is the beauty through the eyes and senses. It is senseless to always attempt to describe..intead might we imbibe in nature. I often sat on a bench or chair, this past week, at a lakehouse, and just relaxed into the view. Hugs ~ Kim
Crandall Avatar
July 7, 2025 at 5:40 PM
I enjoyed this, though it's a bit sad, let's appreciate before we ruin the view.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 7, 2025 at 7:02 PM
It is a bit sad, perhaps. Thank you for letting me know how you saw it. I appreciate you, David!
Hind Avatar
July 7, 2025 at 5:21 PM
An inspiration! I love how the end holds such power, but gently- beautiful work, dear Kim <3
Rodrigues Avatar
July 7, 2025 at 7:01 PM
Thank you, Paige! Hugs
Kendrick Avatar
July 7, 2025 at 5:17 PM
It is true not everyone sees the small things and appreciates them. I enjoyed reading this one. It reads like an excellent spot to relax. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
July 7, 2025 at 7:01 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Roni Avatar
July 7, 2025 at 2:38 PM
"Excellent. Such a beautiful composition of inner beauty and metaphor. Thank you for sharing.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 7, 2025 at 4:44 PM
Thank you, Faruk!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 7, 2025 at 12:52 PM
I enjoyed reading your "Before I Ruin the View" write. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a wonderful day writing away...........
Rodrigues Avatar
July 7, 2025 at 1:29 PM
You have a wonderful day writing, my friend! Hugs and thank you :)
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