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Before I Ruin the View

Before I ruin the view, I see…I see as a child - the colors meld in the sky, in the lake, at tree level. Before I ruin the view, I chew on it, revel in it, see God in it. I see… Before I ruin the view, alone with myself, alone with sights and sounds; infinity. Before I ruin the view, by adding people, I grip each petal, each blade, each coniferous and fanned leaf, each bird, each squirrel, each…each…. Before I ruin the view…before we ruined Eden by setting our sights on low- hanging fruit, perhaps red and delicious, sweet, juicy like gossip and AI…don’t look - it’s a sham. there’s a snake under the rock. Before you and I, ruin anything, everything, let us be awestruck, illuminated, engulfed in the allowance of so many good things. Not everyone sees. Some fish for pictorials.

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Date: 7/9/2025 1:50:00 AM
l love this write Kim because my own childhood memories are like photos in my mind, not moving scenes but still. As l have a neurological illness im told l can get very early flash backs to a very young age and that seems to be happening. l love your poetry. J.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/9/2025 7:21:00 AM
Sorry you’re ill. I find it fascinating that you get those flashbacks. I appreciate your comment, Jacqueline <3
Date: 7/8/2025 6:21:00 AM
A great outlook on the obsession with photography. A beautiful poem. Enjoy nature.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/8/2025 8:05:00 AM
Sometimes words don’t come. Sometimes it is the beauty through the eyes and senses. It is senseless to always attempt to describe..intead might we imbibe in nature. I often sat on a bench or chair, this past week, at a lakehouse, and just relaxed into the view. Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 7/7/2025 5:40:00 PM
I enjoyed this, though it's a bit sad, let's appreciate before we ruin the view.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/7/2025 7:02:00 PM
It is a bit sad, perhaps. Thank you for letting me know how you saw it. I appreciate you, David!
Date: 7/7/2025 5:21:00 PM
An inspiration! I love how the end holds such power, but gently- beautiful work, dear Kim <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/7/2025 7:01:00 PM
Thank you, Paige! Hugs
Date: 7/7/2025 5:17:00 PM
It is true not everyone sees the small things and appreciates them. I enjoyed reading this one. It reads like an excellent spot to relax. Sara K
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/7/2025 7:01:00 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 7/7/2025 2:38:00 PM
"Excellent. Such a beautiful composition of inner beauty and metaphor. Thank you for sharing.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/7/2025 4:44:00 PM
Thank you, Faruk!
Date: 7/7/2025 12:52:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your "Before I Ruin the View" write. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a wonderful day writing away...........
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/7/2025 1:29:00 PM
You have a wonderful day writing, my friend! Hugs and thank you :)

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