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Before I Knew Better

Before I knew any better I loved the nighttime best to slip outside and take a walk while all the world's at rest To feel the cool upon my skin to smell fresh earthy air to see the glitter of distant stars to dream awake, aware Amid the mystical moonlight and dancing shadows from trees I sang, and played, and laughed, and sighed so young, untamed and free 'Though midnight's magical silence would cast an eerie spell I felt at ease within the world alive and very well I'd sprawl on beds of clover scale haystack mountains tall or sometimes splash in moonlit pools as rain began fall Embraced by all the universe I thought no ill could come from creeps, or fiends, or criminals or other human scum But age has made me wiser through tragedy and time and I've begun to gladly shun the dark for hidden crimes Before I knew any better I loved the nighttime best now daytime is my guardian and brings me welcome rest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/9/2018 4:21:00 PM
When I was younger I was a night owl, but now I am usually up with the sun, not sure if that makes me wise, but loved this darkly romantic poem!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 12/9/2018 5:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, Michelle! Glad you liked it! ;)
Date: 12/9/2018 10:39:00 AM
Interesting thoughts... I have never been a night owl..
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 12/9/2018 5:08:00 PM
Thanks! You're probably lucky, it's much healthier to be on a "day schedule"....
Date: 12/7/2018 4:37:00 PM
I, too, find the nighttime a welcome relief to day time. Especially liked this part, my friend: "Embraced by all the universe I thought no ill could come from creeps, or fiends, or criminals or other human scum," and the last line, of course!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 12/7/2018 6:08:00 PM
I knew you could appreciate the beauty of nighttime... as it's the best time for Wild Woman Bonfires!! :D

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