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before fall's end

above the garage where rust-hued leaves have gathered. . . the empty bird nest Sept. 7, 2019

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Date: 1/19/2021 7:11:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on top winning poem.
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Date: 1/15/2021 11:36:00 PM
Lovely image, Andrea. Congrats on your top win with Brian!
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Date: 1/15/2021 9:07:00 PM
BIG CONGRATS TO USUAL TOPPER. Love.
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Date: 1/15/2021 11:08:00 AM
- Wait until next spring ... they come back year after year :) - Congratulations on your win, Andrea :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/15/2021 9:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful haiku. Enjoy your win/day with blessings...........
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Date: 10/21/2019 9:21:00 AM
Powerful haiku Andrea - I love it!
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Date: 9/13/2019 4:11:00 PM
This was one of the best winning entries, Andrea! Congratulations!! Regards // paul
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Date: 9/13/2019 8:49:00 AM
Fall is so rude. It doesn't even let Summer live out it's calendar life before it comes and kisses up to old man winter. And God bless the little creatures, may his grace be in their wings. And lift them up as they do us when each of them joyfully sings.
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Date: 9/12/2019 7:06:00 PM
Sad to see those birds go. I enjoyed seeing the mud swallows dive and swoop for the bugs when they have nested on or near my house. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 9/11/2019 10:33:00 PM
You know how to write an impactful haiku with that Aha moment Andrea and I am surprised this is not higher up on the list. I loved it! Congratulations on your win! xxoo
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Date: 9/11/2019 10:01:00 AM
Oh, spectacular piece; simplicity with upmost impact. Lovely done! Congratulations on your win! xomo
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Date: 9/11/2019 9:21:00 AM
Beautifully done Andrea, captures the silence and loneliness of winter's creep.
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Date: 9/10/2019 8:10:00 PM
Wonderful imagery, Andrea, congratulations on your win. Hugs P.s. hope your granddaughter enters my new contest
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Date: 9/10/2019 7:32:00 PM
Back with most deserved congrats, Andrea.
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Date: 9/10/2019 7:27:00 PM
very. Very Good...my fav. Congrats to you for the win in my contest. you're very talented
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Date: 9/10/2019 6:54:00 PM
Superb imagery Andrea, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/10/2019 6:31:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your winning placement, love the imagery in your haiku!
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Date: 9/10/2019 7:57:00 AM
Great imagery. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 9/9/2019 3:43:00 PM
Oh Andrea, this haiku has impact of that Aha moment! Beautifully created! : ) xxoo
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Date: 9/9/2019 3:57:00 AM
it's superb and beautiful; like it
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Date: 9/8/2019 8:16:00 AM
Nice imagery...and play with words
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Date: 9/8/2019 8:10:00 AM
nice.. very different and clever..
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Date: 9/8/2019 4:21:00 AM
So sad... I love summer. I love Autumn... but what comes next I don't love so much. Beautifully written. Blessings
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Date: 9/8/2019 3:47:00 AM
Bright haiku!
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Date: 9/8/2019 1:23:00 AM
Autumn has it own beauty but brings about the hibernation of plants and some animals, but strangely never birds, they travel in flocks to warmer climates. Love this poem Andrea . Hugs, Jennifer.
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