Sara Kendrick Poet Quatorzain

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Before Day Turned Into Night ITQ

Crepuscular time of day stays  
Slowly gracing the sky with haze
Gone is the golden hue's light phase
The end of day, now animals' praise

Shadows danced behind the trees' leaves
The gentle breeze sighs through the eaves
Day's work somehow interweaves
With all the beauty that relieves

The birds' final songs sung so high
Tall trees like sentinels stand by
Momentary pause, beautify
Twilight settles, pray to Adonai

Before day turned into night's dark
Paused in awe, know this moment's spark   

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Bill Baker January 27, 2024 at 9:21 PM Lovely poetry in the Quatorzain form, Sara. The image matched well with your words. Have a pleasant day, Bill Sara Kendrick January 28, 2024 at 3:46 AM Bill, I liked that image. I would like to be there about now. Sara

Sotto Poet January 27, 2024 at 12:41 PM Your poem is exquisitely crafted, my friend. I must commend you, Sara, on the delightful use of rhymes. It is truly refreshing to witness a poem for this contest that embraces unique monorhymes, and you have executed it with great skill. Sara Kendrick January 28, 2024 at 3:46 AM Why, thank you, Lasaad. Those monorhymes are not so easy to write. Sara K

Silent One January 27, 2024 at 11:58 AM Nice rhymes Sara.. So nice to see a poem for this contest with different monorhymes... you did this one very well.. Sara Kendrick January 27, 2024 at 12:12 PM Thank you, SO. I appreciate your visit and encouragement. Sara K

Vijay Pandit January 27, 2024 at 7:37 AM Awesome images you convey, Sara. A verse that delights on the cusp of night. Indeed, paused in awe! Sara Kendrick January 27, 2024 at 8:23 AM I am delighted for the high praise. Your visits are inspiring. Sara K