Before Day Turned Into Night ITQ

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Crepuscular time of day stays Slowly gracing the sky with haze Gone is the golden hue's light phase The end of day, now animals' praise Shadows danced behind the trees' leaves The gentle breeze sighs through the eaves Day's work somehow interweaves With all the beauty that relieves The birds' final songs sung so high Tall trees like sentinels stand by Momentary pause, beautify Twilight settles, pray to Adonai Before day turned into night's dark Paused in awe, know this moment's spark

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Bill Baker

Date: 1/27/2024 9:21:00 PM

Lovely poetry in the Quatorzain form, Sara. The image matched well with your words. Have a pleasant day, Bill

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/28/2024 3:46:00 AM

Bill, I liked that image. I would like to be there about now. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/27/2024 12:41:00 PM

Your poem is exquisitely crafted, my friend. I must commend you, Sara, on the delightful use of rhymes. It is truly refreshing to witness a poem for this contest that embraces unique monorhymes, and you have executed it with great skill.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/28/2024 3:46:00 AM

Why, thank you, Lasaad. Those monorhymes are not so easy to write. Sara K

Silent One

Date: 1/27/2024 11:58:00 AM

Nice rhymes Sara.. So nice to see a poem for this contest with different monorhymes... you did this one very well..

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/27/2024 12:12:00 PM

Thank you, SO. I appreciate your visit and encouragement. Sara K

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/27/2024 7:37:00 AM

Awesome images you convey, Sara. A verse that delights on the cusp of night. Indeed, paused in awe!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/27/2024 8:23:00 AM

I am delighted for the high praise. Your visits are inspiring. Sara K