Before Day Turned Into Night ITQ

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Image result for pictures of twilight time of day in spring

Crepuscular time of day stays  
Slowly gracing the sky with haze
Gone is the golden hue's light phase
The end of day, now animals' praise

Shadows danced behind the trees' leaves
The gentle breeze sighs through the eaves
Day's work somehow interweaves
With all the beauty that relieves

The birds' final songs sung so high
Tall trees like sentinels stand by
Momentary pause, beautify
Twilight settles, pray to Adonai

Before day turned into night's dark
Paused in awe, know this moment's spark

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Bill Baker

Date: 1/27/2024 9:21:00 PM

Lovely poetry in the Quatorzain form, Sara. The image matched well with your words. Have a pleasant day, Bill

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/28/2024 3:46:00 AM

Bill, I liked that image. I would like to be there about now. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/27/2024 12:41:00 PM

Your poem is exquisitely crafted, my friend. I must commend you, Sara, on the delightful use of rhymes. It is truly refreshing to witness a poem for this contest that embraces unique monorhymes, and you have executed it with great skill.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/28/2024 3:46:00 AM

Why, thank you, Lasaad. Those monorhymes are not so easy to write. Sara K